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September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a good twist ending. I wasn't expecting it. And an interesting dynamic.
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGOD. =O the ending is beautiful! it almost made me cry. great job! keep it up.
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a surprising twist at the end. I knew something was up but I did not know what.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg that was soo amazing and such a surprise. i never saw it coming wow. very very good story, i loved it. i hope to read more like this. WONDERFUL
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing, I still can\'t believe that she was a he all along!!! I hope you write abother story like this, and make sure you give the name of the narrator!!! I\'m dying to know the name of the poor man that has to deal with this.
The emotions are really vibrant and stand out a lot throughout the story. I especially loved the ending sentence, you closed it up well, although I wish you enver closed it up at all. =| You should a sequel, or another chapter, just for us!
Fcuked up, this may be, but fcuked up can be kinda good sometimes .. take me for example. I am quite fcuked up, and very little will get me riled up and mad. =]
This story rocks my box
The emotions are really vibrant and stand out a lot throughout the story. I especially loved the ending sentence, you closed it up well, although I wish you enver closed it up at all. =| You should a sequel, or another chapter, just for us!
Fcuked up, this may be, but fcuked up can be kinda good sometimes .. take me for example. I am quite fcuked up, and very little will get me riled up and mad. =]
This story rocks my box
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I admire your writing style. I was surprised in the end, the way you wrote the sexual intercourse really did assume that it was a woman. But the whole mental confusion and transvesticism was completely wonderful. I have to say I really enjoyed reading this. =)
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That story was beautiful!!! Definately one of the best stories I\'ve read on AFFN. I\'m surprised you only have eight reviews so far. I think you had everyone fooled about Jessica, well, at least me anyway, but please UPDATE SOON!
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is an excellent story. I am utterly amazed at how well you portrayed their emotions! The ending was so shocking too! I hope you post more stories soon!
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good! I kinda expected that \'she\' was really a he, but the rest of the ending I wasn\'t prepared for. The intensity of the emotions was nicely portrayed. Definitely one of the best stories that I\'ve read in a long time.
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O___O HOLY SHiT .. that\'s a guy??? Haha, wow .. that was hot. ::nosebleed:: And quite a turn. Yaoi .. ::drool:: Actually, I don\'t know what to classify this. It\'s a first, and damn well amazing. =]