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June 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was hot.
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly Amazing!!!! I loved this not just because it had two hot angels having sex (that is a bonus though) but the way you convey emotions is amazing. It's so real that I can picture it in my head and see the positions there in and everything. Keep up the good work!!
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is really really good! Really! I love your use of descriptives--the imagery is really powerful and lush, like a painting almost. And it\'s sweet without being saccharine or corny. Brilliant job!
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see I wasn\'t the only one who got the idea of angels out of that song. ^.^ Very nice. Perhaps would there be more to it?
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*shiver* yum yum yum
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the idea for this story. Very creative. The only thing I didn\'t really understand was at the beginning when you said \"and more\" all the time. It just didn\'t seem to work in my mind...