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for Don't Judge A Vampire By Its Fangs

by janette

schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like Angelo\'s idea of fun, too. I want more, and preferably a nice long, kinky chapter instead of these little ones you keep posting. But I\'ll take whatever I can get.

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person memorietrail
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes ,i want more how could i not.it so very good!
person Lianelle
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Frustratedly looks at her computer debating whether (a) a whole bunch of deep purple-black roses, (b) a bottle of deep red armoisie, (c) my own blood and tears, (d) ... might get me a new update (I know, I\'m greedy, I only catched up on today and I got a lot to read but as alway, in your case, it\'s never enough... Kind of makes you understand how sangsue go crazy... Well, you get the picture... Oh, and since RL is hell on earth, just don\'t forget to throw this back at me... So anyway, Very, very nice interplay and paralell relationships for this new game of yours, and well, very, very erotic, so delightfully done that the way the stakes go up with the \"horror\" just falls completely into place. Weasel and Angelo seem to be in one of their good mood so I\'m sure the coming playtime with Neith will be perversely enjoyable...

Et le jeune homme regarda la tache moiree glisser sur le miroir et rejoindre le lac pourpre s\'aggrandissant sur le sol de marbre. Son corps s\'arqua et un soupir de plaisir passa ses levres bleuies lorsque le brouillard sembla l\'envelopper.
person Asasina
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughs*
You know I want more!
I\'m glad to hear your going to try and get one published. Do you have a place all ready in mind? I\'ve got a story I\'m going to try and get published, Innocent Seduction. I actually have a good portion of it posted here.
Anyways, hurry with the next chapter, I want to know what happens next!
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Grabs another fish and begins the slapping* I want more craziness, mixed in with blood and sex and all manners of fun. So write more and don\'t leave us fans waiting. Angelo is such a fuck, but I love him anyway.

CP the amused
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I have to friend you on LJ so I can read more. *Hits you with another fish* I was only slightly squicked by the flesh-eating bit, but blood is actually one of my biggest turn-ons. Get to the fun smut and not the stuff that makes me wanna read something else.

CP the slightly disturbed
person Asasina
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I\'m going crazy here... Each chapter is even better than the first and keeps you glued to the screen as you read each word. At least it does me.
Have you ever thought of publishing your work? Just a thought.
I look forward to your next chapter! *wearing a t-shirt that says \'I love Weasel and Angelo\'.*
person RedFox
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your stories. I have been to your site and I think I\'ve read just about everything there. I was delighted when I saw this here and quickly read it. I\'m not to keen on Angelo and his ways and if I were Weasal...I think I would try and get back at Angelo as much as possible. Interesting relationship between those two. I\'m curious to see what happens in your story line with Weasal\'s uncle. Keep up the great story telling!!
person yami990
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please. unless you want to have your birthing equpment taken away using a plastic spork.
person dangspiffy
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS HOTT!!!! \'I don\'t like the whole goth thing but very hott, go on please!!!