rate_review Reviews

I really like were this story is going. I love finding obscure storys. I\'ll keep reveiwing as I go. So you\'ll read from me soon.

OMG... this story is so good. I havn\'t read a really good vampire story in a long while and this really did a good one. Thank you for quintching my voyeristic lust for blood. I\'ll keep reading if you\'ll keep on reading.

Soooo... One of my favourite scenery (the graveyard), my favourite gamers and a oh-so-lovely toy to play with (at list a liitel bit more)...Mmmm, let me think, yes, of course, please, Mme la Muse, do hear our pleas and desperate cries, the noise of our fingers screeching and bleeding on your door, as we avidly await the next tantalizing installment... I\'m not being too dramatic there, am I ;-) Honestly, whatever helps the muse (candles, chilled wine, a massage, tortuously cruel ideas...), you get it...

Un sourire glace accueillit sa remarque. Lorsque le couteau fit sa premiere entaille, traçant les meandres d\'un ancien langage, il comprit qu\'il n\'etait plus qu\'un canevas destine a un plaisir superieur.

P-S: And don\'t worry about the stuff you (don\'t owe but have very graciously agreed to send) me... I\'ll be patiently waiting (or I could throw a tantrum and make my pretty Angelo doll bleed but, funnily, I don\'t think it would be very conclusive , plus I only have it in my head... Damned... So anyway, I hope RL still leaves you breathing time and that the muse is not too harsh a mistress this weekend.

Great chapter. Good luck on your muse. I know how much of a pain they can be.
I know, personally, I\'d like to see them toy around with Neith a little longer. I want to see if they can breath him, because he\'s just too full of himself after everything has happened. \'Course, that\'s just my thoughts, you don\'t have to take them seriously if you don\'t want to. I\'m just a girl that\'s into that kind of thing. *smile*

I have read the blackwidower series and changing fortunes. I love your characters....Angelo and Weasel are just so yummy and devious. Can\'t wait to see what happens next...

I think I\'ve read Danse Macabre once before, in fact I\'m pretty sure I have, but I\'ll probably end up reading it again sometime soon because I\'m feeling the desire for blood and dubious consensuality and all that good stuff. This chapter was fun, so I hope the muses attack you and make you write even more.

CP the evil

I\'m gone for a day and find all these lovely, beautiful, chapters... *sighs contently* Loved the last chapter, wasn\'t sure whether I should just cry or get all giddy. I love Angelo\'s idea of fun. And really like that Weasel is starting to get into the game a little more.
But, boy, the way they\'re working Neith over, it\'s just beautiful.
*cough* Don\'t mind me, I\'m messed up... heh I\'ve got an older story I\'m reposting in the Original-Erotica/sex section, if anyone is interested in checking it out. It\'s nothing like \'My Beloved Shadow\', though.
But, anyways, back on track. Please put up more chapters, I want to see what more fun Angelo and Weasel will have with poor little Neith. *grins*

I still want more please

Yeah, slight squirming of the not so good kind again, but I\'m a glutton for punishment. MORE! Angelo is such a fuck, you should write something showing us what he\'s like on his own.

CP the bored

You\'re... just.... evil... This (whole) piece is one of the most sinfully delicious play in the BW-verse. Finally, we see the turn (or at least the beginning) in Weasel\'s behaviour between BW and CF. He gives in to his craving for Angelo, love, lust and blood, he lets go of his nature and strengthen their bond throughout this game, pushing (in my view) the sharing up to a new level (and rebalancing the equilibrium between them). The fact that each bite of this story has to be slowly devoured to fully capture its ectasy just makes it more riveting... And the shift from masters to pawns for the twins makes for a very interesting mirror of the parallel relationships... Once again, you succeed in creating luxurously enjoyable blood-heating fantasies in my head... Sweet and Spicy...

La vision l\'emporta, annihilant ses sens dans un tourbillon de plaisir intense. Chaque fois, elle plongeait un peu plus dans ce mirage, cette sensation brulante courant dans ses veines alors que ses doigts effleurait le parchemin craquele...

P-S: Just for the record, we readers noticed the missing morsel but thought you just had a missing time period where everyone could guess what happened (of course, what you wrote is even far more delightful...) and, we got an additional chapter as bonus so, really, no complaints from my end!