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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Eli,
I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,
Very nicely written:)
I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,
Very nicely written:)
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... Cough. Apparently I cannot do anything right.
Ahem. Anyway, wow, Eli. That was amazingly dark. I loved it. It\'s beautifully written and I love the vulnerableness of the narrator, especially when it comes to Theodore. I think you have quite the story here... can\'t wait to see what you come up with next.
And I kind of want a boy covered in gold paint now. Mmhmm.
Ahem. Anyway, wow, Eli. That was amazingly dark. I loved it. It\'s beautifully written and I love the vulnerableness of the narrator, especially when it comes to Theodore. I think you have quite the story here... can\'t wait to see what you come up with next.
And I kind of want a boy covered in gold paint now. Mmhmm.
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you\'re very talented... this story is so beautiful and so well done. It\'s really messing with my head at this time of night. Very disturbing and... mmm... seductive?... at the same time. I like that the characters aren\'t clear cut... Nikolaus seems as much a part of this weird world as he is a victim of it. I really hope you write more, even though I\'m a little afraid that it won\'t go good places. o_O
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Honestly, I really, really like your writing style. It\'s a strange mix, but not at all in a bad way. It\'s good to go from descriptions that pull you in and make you feel like you\'re being tugged along or sucked inside to lines that make you laugh out loud or hurt or...I don\'t know how to describe it, it\'s just really honest - if that makes sense. And the PoV is great for the story. Oh, and it\'s hot. Mmmmmhot. ;) And....... you use the name Theodore. >.>
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was sooo sad! I love you\'re writing style btw, \"Blink blink frown\"- very funny!
More please!
More please!
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good fic!
Poor Nikki... You should write more chapters! please...
Poor Nikki... You should write more chapters! please...
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is an awesome peice of work and I can\'t wait to read more.
Keep up the great work.
~Uncertainties~
Keep up the great work.
~Uncertainties~
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gonna say the same thing I said on your LJ.. almost, lol. This was amazing. I love it to pieces and you must write more because a great writer like you can\'t let this great story not carry on because both you and the story are too amazing for that.
<3 Carlie.
<3 Carlie.
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don\'t tell me it\'s a one-shot T_T It\'ll make a good story (it is allready ;))!! Write more! :D