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for School Girls' Stories - Year 2

by SolaceFaerie

person Life
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMBECKY, I am in love with your story, I live for this story, I would have reviewed sooner, but my laptop was acting up
person Stripperella II
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Solly! I apologize for not reviewing sooner hehe, well I`m a fan of your fic! I\'ve read year one and loved it. I haven\'t read the second yet, but I\'m getting to it. I liked how you wrote everything filled with suspense. Sometimes the titles kind of give away what\'s going to happen ^-^ My fav couple was Shai and Mr. Tennison ( it was great while it lasted). I would love to try some fanart, but would it be too much trole to ask you to post a chapter on all the characters\' physical description? Like eye color and hair color? That would be great thanks! But i understand if you\'re too busy. =) Actually you know what, my fav character was Yuki\'s older sister. Keep up the great work!
person Silver Strings
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m baaak! I haven\'t been reading this for a while and man have I missed it. The part were yuki says \"I want to be a video game designer… Does that make me a geek?” I want to be the same thing. Lol anyways keep on writing I love this story so much.
person Stripperella II
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woops, I meant \"trouble\" not trole <_< so sorry
person Deathcalled
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And the plot seems to be a heavenily bliss! blah update soon my opihuys ( I Don\'t know what that is)
person Deathcalled
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehe he that was funny I love Yuki!

SHE ROCKS!
person your friendly fanatic review person
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh boy! Kyoei gave Teiyoku the ol\' one-two hitter quitter, huh? he fights for his chick. that\'s my boy! hahahaha... Teiyoku\'s gettin creepy, poppin up when ya least expect him.gotta admire Kyoei tying so hard to be apart of Shai and Shu\'s life. like Kyoei, i would want him to be the father, but we can\'t always have our way (which is inevitably a constant reminder throughout this story). Shai wants both men but does she love Kyoei? will she ever love Kyoei as much as Teiyoku, unlike the way Fuji couldn\'t balance her future and Amatsu - leading to their breakup? i hope this is not the last we see of Amatsu either... Fuji did fight from him the first time they broke up, tho she didn\'t have Devilin and Danko to worry about with a big ass batch of emotions that came along with them... all three of them as well as her inner demons. (Fuji said it best “Get in line.” lol)

Shai and Fuji got all this shit happening... get Yuki into the fucking game! more Yuki & Shinwa please! Shinwa got some \'splainin to do anyway, he keepin all this stuff from her; his envolvment with the murder of Amatsu\'s brother (who everyone is seeming to forget) a movie role and then who knows what else *shakes head*...

i get so exicted that i review before you\'re even done posting the chapters!... maybe you should update faster. ;)

Tiera !
person Anon
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Blah Teiyoku is going to ruin Shai even if he does love he.. he dug his hole now he should lay in it!

Just thought I would mention there are two typos when Shai drops her bag after Teiyoku takes her hand it says \"bad\" and when Kyeoi says he\'s not going to give up on her it says \"your\" (like the second line before last)

I agree more Yuki! Dying to know about what Shinwa going to explain to her as well as when they\'re gonna be able to get it on!
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Tears in eyes* Poor Shai, I wish she could just be happy with Kyoei instead of that damn Teiyoku Tennison getting in the way! I\'m so completely in love with this story, update soon k ^^
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW!! Love that last chapter! And poor Fuji, I hope she gets some happiness in her life. She\'s certainly changed since the story started.