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for School Girls' Stories - Year 2

by SolaceFaerie

person Tiera
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so... she\'s dating Devilin (whom may or may not helped loosen up her leg!)... she didn\'t sing a song about Amatsu after all like i thought she would. i had no idea \"Wicked\" would be the song, i never even heard it before but i\'m gonna download it after this review. lol this is to insist to the girls at the private school to know Fuji and Danko really hate eachother or something...? im confusing myself.
well, wonderful chapters, Solly. let\'s see what Fuji\'s friend have to say bout this!

smooches.
person Stripperella II
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heya Solly! It was so funny when they started singing. I never heard the song before but when I read it, I thought for sure the feeling was going to be \"love\" Then loathing appears and it made me laugh =P Please update soon! I can\'t wait to read what happens to Fuji & Devilin! I hope something happens soon ^-^ Hee hee And i loved how you incorporated dancing into this, as see in my name, I am a dancer also! Toodles darling~
person Tiera
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 25 is yet another great chapter... Amatsu still cares for Fuji maybe. that\'s good. in the last line... hmm.. who could it be?

thnx 4 da update
person Tiera
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL @ Danko singing and dancing. wtf does Fuji has planned, i wonder. is she gonna try and get Amatsu\'s affection back? that\'s the only thought i have of WHY she would be performing in front of ppl (weirdly with Danko), she doesn\'t have to prove anything else (i don\'t think). and then what is this song she\'s talking about....

great chapter Solly, looking forward for the chappie!
person liz
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, Solly! You absolutely must tell me the instant you put up any more in this storyline. I am so in love with you right now! *grin* Honestly, it\'s all so good, I\'m just dazzled. That and the fact that I read ALL of these schoolgirl stories in two sittings of about 8 hours each. I promise to do an actual review when each and every new one comes out though. But I\'m not all that great at reviewing, just at gushing! *gush*
person Tiera
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pronunciation, my dear.

Okay, I’ve felt my way around the Japanese names but once Ririka came along I feel I have to know the correct pronunciations of these names! Some of them are obviously easy (Shinwa, Shai, Yuki, Fuji) and some I question and pronounce to myself several different ways (Kaori, Kyoei, Teiyouku) some I’m totally in the dark about (Ririka, Hanasaki Keiko) and so on. I’m not illiterate - I just wanna make sure I’m saying them right! I\'m sure you don\'t want us messing up your work (this is why i never read Harry Potter. j/k). This has been irking me for a bit now. Email me!
person Deathcalled
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH! No don\'t make him leave! I love him! -cries- If you make him leave I am going to shot you in the arm with a shotgun!
person Tiera
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
now everything looks bad for Yuki. WHY?! why must you torture Yuki, Solly? :(

the only way to make up for this messed up chapter is to post another one, plz. :-*

person ThePQ
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I just spent like...eight hours or something (with a few interuptions) reading not only this story, but the first one, and wow. I like it... I really hope you bring back what\'s happening with Kaoki and Nakobu. They were kind of my favorites :( and Devilin is a very interesting charecter... I always like the eviler of charecters... shame on me.
Fabulous story, I simply cannot wait for more.
~PQ
person Tiera
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw shit. Yuki and her big mouth. shit shit shit! things gonna get worse between her n Shinwa, that\'s just what i think and what the last pargrahs implys but i DO NOT want that to happen.

lol @ her and Ririka going at it. hehe go Yuki!

[PS: remember in the character description thing in SGS-I? you said you had a chapter which centered arounf Velvet Wrappings. will you release sorta like a \"bloopers\" thingy where all your scrapped chapters and drafts are posted? that\'d be cool.]

thanx for the update n i wait for more. :-*