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i need a tissue! Kyoei is such a good man! how could he have known about that night? geez it tears me up that Shai kept secrets from him and he doesn\'t deserve it, and he loves and cares for her and her son so much! i hope Shai is done with the mistakes...

thnx 4 da update ;)

ah! wtf? you can\'t just leave it there! that chapter was all but long! and it NEEDS to be; or continued! talk about a tangled web we weave! Shoushin knew Nakago eh? and Shinwa knows the dirty jest of it all. he\'s not gonna tell Yuki about Amatsu\'s brother? or is Fuji or Amatsu? is this all gonna come out some time? what about the 3 masked men? ooo i wanna know who they were....

Solly, you only let on enuff to keep us wanting more....

I\'m kind of sad about Devilin and Fuji, I liked Amatsu, but that\'s okay, keep writing Solly! I can\'t wait to see what Danko has in store for those men who raped her teehee =)

Noooooooooo!! *shakes fist* lol damn Shai needs to get her head on straight!

awwww... i\'m tearing up for Shai. she wasn\'t in her right mind at all. dare i say it... rape? depends on what Shai calls it. but OMG what a chapter, and how could this go on with Devilin and Fuji somewhere in the house? geezus... i gotta have more! everythings going to shit, Solly!

and this is why i love drama. :-*


-“I’m not sure what happened,” Shai admitted helplessly. “One minute we were enjoying things, the next Yuki was mad at Fuji for not telling her she was dating *Deviling,” Shai missed *Teikoku’s raised eyebrow on this one, “and then Shinwa asked where Shu was since my father was on a date and Kyoei got mad at me, and then… it was just a mess.”

*might wanna edit those^

i think this chapter worked well. changing it again would only improve it. you revealed how Devilin and Fuji\'s relationship is (im not even sure where it began), which is more physical that her relationship with Amatsu already. my mind is reeling about what\'s going to happen next with Fuji and Yuki and Shinwa (dont forget them!)
so she\'s really turning into ice and forgetting Amatsu isn\'t she? that\'s cold.
i realized..i\'m liking..no...i\'m loving Devilin; though his features seem evil ironically he\'s been nothing but sincere and loyal this whole time!

i heard the \"What Is this Feeling?\" song off Wicked too.

you know what to do. :D

gotta gotta review now. Weeeeeeeeheeeee.

Goodness me. I liked the little thing Fuji and Danko did. Very nicely done. Hm... are Devlin and Fuji REALLY going out?! Geeze, if they are, blehhhhh.

Poor Fuji. I almost feel sorry for her. Keyword being almost. Anyways, poor Amatsu. *sniffles and huggles* He can have meee. Hehehe.

oh crap...wasn\'t expecting all that to pop off. i wanna know what\'s gonna happen next!

And the shit hits the fan!! WooO... the tension

I can\'t think of anything..... damn..... blah