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for School Girls' Stories - Year 2

by SolaceFaerie

person Ara Kusabana
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh Solly!

Oh my God love! *using her bad British accent* Wonderful story. Just wonderful. I love the last couple of chapters. With Amatsu and Fuji and all that good stuff and NOW?! Kaori\'s back!... hey wait, what about Nakago? O.o; Wasn\'t he with her.. or I should keep my mouth shut. Haha.

Well anyways, I\'m leaving something cuz I\'m bored like that and I\'m in a rather good mood. LOL

Luv ya muchos! <3<3<3<3
xoxo
Ara
person TT
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\'preciate the update!

well that went more smoothly than expected.... and Kaori\'s back! what...how...?! i wasn\'t that surprised tho, when i read the title, ?The Return of the Prodigal Daughter\" i thought \'Kaori\'s coming home. but then when i started reading i thought Yuki... then i shoulda kept my first guess. lol

stupendous (sp?)

;-*
person stella
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wait, so did kaori and nakago contract aids??
i REALLY hope amatsu and fuji will get back together!

love this story..keep updating! :)
person Angel
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*tear* that was sad :(
person TT (tired of Tiera)
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm.. i dont even remember the last time Fuji and Yuki had a coversation... \'twas a pleasant read. OMG Shinji\'s dating the 18-year-old babysitter, that dude\'s a player fo realz. question: did Yuki ever give Shinwa that gift she spent all her money on?

and woah this sliver-haired guy sounds like-a Shinwa. but animated. lol bring him back! you wouldn\'t have \"introduced\" him like you did if he wasn\'t going to reoccur in following chapters. i wanna know who Yuki reminded him of... i sense/expect a new character...!

TT (aka Tiera the loveable reviewer) :-*
person Tiera review for Ch. 42 & 43
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amatsu\'s going for it?! NO-FUCKING-WAY! this is actually really cool becuz i want this \"Friendly Competition\" VERY much! what did Amatsu do with family, i wonder?

speaking of families... reading about Shinwa\'s family makes me wince, my mind overflowing with emotions... that was a lot of new info! i was surprised to find out his dad is with his late ex-girlfriend\'s older sister (sorta like Shai\'s baby father being married to her half-sister\'s mother. complicated.)... damn, i don\'t want Shinwa to leave Yuki! this is fucked up!

i anticipate with angst what\'s going to happen with these characters! ARGH! i\'m going speechless!

WOW. thanks for posting, Solly. :)
person Tiera
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nnnnoooooooo... make Shinwa stay! Don’t make him leave Yuki (even if he promises to come back)! There’s gotta be another way, damn you! (excuse the bluntness) This is getting, subsequently, oh so depressing... I’m always vulnerable to the drama that seems to take a twist at very turn, too. Eh, it’s just fiction right? Very complex, thrilling, innovated fiction!

Happy [early] b-day Solly! Kudos for the daily updates. I can\'t believe 2nd year is coming to a close already (I think I said this with 1st year LOL)! :(
person Angel
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo!! so proud of Shai! And wow Fuji\'s getting all crazy now thats just... crazy lol
person Angel
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME ending for the chapter 41! Cant wait to see what happens
person Tiera
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
devastating turn of events Solly! geezus...