rate_review Reviews

So are the vampy mind games part of the seduction? Poor boy. He\'s going to end up spraining his wrist if this keeps up.

please continue tis is a great story! please update!!! i luv vamp fics there mysterious. [you were expecting different there fucking vampires you dumbass] we all have our voices and no mine doesn\'t stay in its box either [because its too small! i outgrew the damned thing when you were 7 you 23 year old bitch!] whatever. [fuck off] show me my boyfriend and i will. [youre a psycho.] well, anyway i loved your story.

I\'m too lazy to actually sign in..heh heh, but I just wanted to let you know that I\'m reading your story, and I like it ^^
I\'m always looking for m/m on these vampire stories hee hee hee. I\'m not sure that I totally get the vampire\'s intentions, but I don\'t think I\'m meant to yet. So I\'ll just wait for more! ^^

I like your story...especially the little voice. Oh, and your first chapter was a lime, there was no actual sex, just play. Keep writing, I really like it.

Ilove you little chapter diviers,,,
I have box for my little voice too but I don\'t send it away it hids in there whae I go crazy
:)

I think this has some great potential. I would really like to see some more character development, but it\'s coming alone quite nicely. Keep up the good work and I\'ll try and keep checking up on this story.