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Judge: It is pretty, and why can\'t i eat their cookies *sniff sniff*

Dante: Hey back off my cookie, i was given-ok throwen-at me. *Munches happily on cookie*

Naireth: I agree mine *catches cookie happily munching on it* ooh needs milk *heads off to get milk*

Chaos & Dante: Bring us some Milk too.

Chaos: *Examines cookie while waiting on Naireth to get back* Nice update by the way, you really must do it again, and please tell me it\'s soemthign evil taht happens if he falls for the vampire dude?

Naireth: *comes back and hands out milk before returning to munching cookie and drinking his milk* I agree nice Update, but you should have made him wear teh leather. OOH can teh outfit that the lazy bum lady makes him be Leather?

Dante: Make it black leather...Black is such a nice color.

Naireth: *Binds and gags Dante* Shut up. No it can\'t be Black, make it brown.

Chaos: Brown? Boy whats your problem *Knocks Naireh out* Blakc is so much better.

Judge: Chaos...

Chaos: *looks at Judge lady* Umm oops i forgot you were here *Runs off*

Judge: GET BACK HERE YOU ARE GOING TO PAY FOR HITTING NAIRETH. Oh and before i forget make it red, it should be red to match his room, and if you can convince him make it be leather other wise just trty and convince the lazy bum lady to make it red...Oh and Update soon please. *Grabs Dante and Naireth dragging them out of the way and runs after Chaos*

Ok. Let me just say how much I *LOOOOOOOOVE* this story! I tried to read it the other night, but was kicked off the computer by my mom! Now that I have read it, I absolutly *love* it! Me WANT MORE! *PLEASE!*^_^! Keep it up!

Brian is extremely calm about all this. I think I\'d be pretty upset finding out there were other lovers and I was being dressed up like a doll to be shown off to all the others. I know a Vamp would have had lovers in past centuries, but it would still annoy me! Oh well. I guess a life of pampering and sex can\'t be all bad, but the jury\'s still out on this \'death by blood-sucking\' thing.

How does Tyreal choose his lovers? I think he doesn\'t have a harem because he\'s too possesive. He\'s afraid his lovers would entertain each other while he\'s not around. That\'s my opinion anyway.

Oh, and my reviews are based on the story. Honest! I\'ve noticed that I write differently for each story I review, so whatever I say is because the story put me into that type of mood. Totally not my fault, it\'s all yours, so take responsibility! lol I\'ve never been called a cereal prize though. I was once compared to the comic in a Bazooka Joe bubble gum wrapper, but never cereal prizes.

Oh wow that was really good please update soon, and Ireally love the way you title your chapters.

This is so cool please update soon Ireally must know what happens next pleaaasse updaatttee!

I like that, it was kinda cute. \'It\'s okay to be a wuss because I, Macho Vamp, am here to save you!\' Frankly, I wouldn\'t find the words comforting, but I would be more than happy to sleep through all the drama.

So, these wolves crave the smell of vampire and phermones? That\'s kind of kinky and sounds like a personal issue. Maybe the wolves need a little voice too...so they can work on their issues.

Judge: OOH, so pretty. You must update soon.

Dante: Hey that was mean, bringin him into it like that, poor boy, and then...

Judge: Dante

Dante: Yes?

Judge: Shut up, it was good, so just shut up

Naireth: I got him...drags dante off

Judge: Thank you

Chaos: Stupdi Vampire he should have just left...

Judge: Glares at Chaos...Chaos

Chaos: oops, heh, didn\'t realize she was here..Um yes what can i do for ya?

Judge: Get over here you evil little boy

Chaos: EEP..runs off being chased by the judge person

So, Brian\'s wanted by Vamps and wolves? Weres? I can see it now...scrawny virgin male is prepared for sacrifice to the wolf god, but is saved at the last minute by nameless vamp. Scrawny male rewards blood-sucking hero with virginity and a dab of life-force.

Or maybe Brian is the half-blood prince of some foreign creatures of the night world? Please update soon so I can stop making things up.

Hey Ireally like this please update soon Oh ,and Ihave alittle voice as well it doesn\'t stay in it\'s box either

Very, very ,very, very, very, very, (you get the point) good story
Is it really your first????
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