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::catches cookie in mouth and munches on it:: Damn it, I hate short chapters that make me wait another chapter for the good stuff. ::finishes cookie:: Hurry up and write more!!!

Amazing story...with even more amazing updates. Keep the updates coming...I wanna know what you have in store for your readers.
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Judge: Yummy cookie *munches cookie*

Chaos: *rubs head and glairs at Judge Lady while munching on cookie* Evil woman, i swear you must be a sadest or something. This writer is nearly as evil as you what with his going to kill Brian and all...

Nairith: He never said he was going to kill Brian, Brian is just a depressed person and is assumeing he is going to be killed. Now hush Chaos *munches cookie happily*

Dante: *rubes head and glaires at Nairith* shut up Nairith *munches cookie* by the way evil writer you are, what with having her stop all those fun rumors and all.

Judge: Ok all of you shut up and chill. I am sure Brian will be fine-or at least not be killed unless it is just him being vamped-so leave it be. And of course the rumors were stopped Dante, geez not liek they could just be let run rampent. Well either way even if it was a bit shorter then normal, good chapter please update soon.

Dante: Oh ya didn\'t you say something about Brian\'s voice coming back in that chapter?

Glorious. I just luv your story,and I luv Aya too so really like that chapter title. So update okay!( pleasssseeee!)

That was great! Usually, with longer stories, I need to read them in several sittings, but this one carried me straight through it without a break. The funny parts are quite charming, and the sexy bits are very hot! And I love all the little footnotes you put in. It\'s interesting to learn where certain references come from, or what opinions you hold about various things you mention.

Oh, and I really like Billy Joel, too. Chapter 4 of my new story opens with a quote from him.

Thanks for your kind review of \"Sugar Hearts\"! At the rate I\'m going, my novel should be done sometime before humanity evolves into glowing balls of energy. *Wink*

Love,
Falcon

Please continue the story soon, but that voice was anoying, dont bring it back. I reviewed so I hope you`ll be nicer to Brian.

COOKIE!!! *grabbs cookie and scarfs it down* suuuuuuuuuuuuuugar. sorry.

Awwwwwwww...poor Brian I feel bad that would be agonizing. ug, another bad place to stop!!! T_T eh. Update soon PLEEZE! ....and more cookies.

~BBB

Judge: What kind of ending is that...dang you you evil person.

Chaos: and you tell me to calm down

Nairith: Be quite Chaos and leave her alone. Very good chapter, and poor vampire man being forced to marry like that.

Dante: ya ya Nairith, stop beign a sissy. so he has to get hitched so what. then he won\'t have to pick up more people like brain

Nairith: Thats mean Dante *knocks Dante out and drags him away* mean Dante

Chaos: well it is *gets knocked out*

Judge: No beaing mean for you either Chaos. It was a good chapter, please update soon. *drags off Chaos, sticks head back in* oh and sorry i haven\'t reviewed in a bit *heads off again mumbling* ooh maybe he gets married to brain

Glad you put some more up! Do add more I want to know what you\'re goning to have happen.

Please let them get back together. They have to! I can\'t stand sad endings! I really love your story though. And my boyfriend said I can\'t let guys make out in front of me, to make up for it he let me tell him yaoi stories though. But, back on topic, I do like the bit of coflict. Marriage to a bitch. Hey, if she is a bitch, maybe she is also a wolf, and is evil, and will die. Well update when you can,

Jodea Moondreamer