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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good so far, its very detailed and interesting. if u could, try to cut down the sentences some...i am having a bit of trouble going from one thought to the next when its all in one sentence, other than that i enjoyed it very much and look forward to the next installment
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Neato so far,except for the backhand.What the hell was that?It served no purpose as far as I can tell.
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far so please update soon. I don\'t like the mother of course--Shin. I think he will be a likeable guy. ^___^