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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, I\'m reviewing my own story. Lol. No I\'m not, I\'m talking to my lovely reviewers...is that a word??? Hmm.
Aurora - Yes, I am hard on the reviewers, he he. But look what it got me! Thank you for answering my question and reviewing.
Azure and Onyx - I\'m sorry I am driving you insane. But if I were predictable and weren\'t driving you insane would you like it as much??? See, we all agree. Thank you for answering my question and reviewing.
Kat - I know, I think I may make it a little more complex then it needs to be sometimes. Oh, yes, the voices. Yeah, the reason you can\'t distinguish between them it because my computer is insane! I tried to put them in illatics but I like this better, Thank you.
Miztikal_Dragon - Yes, funny plot twists and all that stuff. Have to have a few of those! Thank you for reviewing.
Nea - I love that idea!!! Gomen Gomen. Thank you so much. I\'d say it in another language but I don\'t know how! HA! because I would reveal what I have the aunt in there for. Tho you are right. She is there for a purpose. Her own purpose.
I told you all there would be bad things. I am going to keep to that word. Trust me. *evil grin*
Aurora - Yes, I am hard on the reviewers, he he. But look what it got me! Thank you for answering my question and reviewing.
Azure and Onyx - I\'m sorry I am driving you insane. But if I were predictable and weren\'t driving you insane would you like it as much??? See, we all agree. Thank you for answering my question and reviewing.
Kat - I know, I think I may make it a little more complex then it needs to be sometimes. Oh, yes, the voices. Yeah, the reason you can\'t distinguish between them it because my computer is insane! I tried to put them in illatics but I like this better, Thank you.
Miztikal_Dragon - Yes, funny plot twists and all that stuff. Have to have a few of those! Thank you for reviewing.
Nea - I love that idea!!! Gomen Gomen. Thank you so much. I\'d say it in another language but I don\'t know how! HA! because I would reveal what I have the aunt in there for. Tho you are right. She is there for a purpose. Her own purpose.
I told you all there would be bad things. I am going to keep to that word. Trust me. *evil grin*
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very insightful, as usual. I love your style, keep it up!
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooo who is Julian......i will stay up a lil bit longer I guess to see if you update....the story is great......kinda sad and scary love it
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fuck that shit!! I loved Chapter 4!!!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really lovin this story!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7 was, umm, different I guess. You totally lost me on this chapter. I even read it twice so I could try to see where you were going with this. What\'s with the unnamed character or as I call him \'He who denies all titles\'? Is this some institution for the insanely intelligent? I\'m currently in the dark so lead me to the light. How will \'He who denies all titles\' hinder or help Kit\'s situation? Will he annoy Kit into insanity? And when will we get to Kit/Nick? I am but a simple person with simple needs and this chapter was too complex for me because the character was just a little too out there. I can only understand your regular mentally insane person better. I know that this is what makes your story different, but I like what I like and I also like to complain (it\'s what I do best). I\'ll continue to read and review because I liked what I read before this chapter (even if I didn\'t like how the events progressed) and hopefully I\'ll love what you put out after. Looking forward to more!
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, you have to hurry and get the next chapter out! Your just about as evil as I am, leaving off on a cliffhanger. Cliffhangers are so much fun. *grins* I\'ll be waiting here patiently for you to put up the next chapter.
Btw, you\'ve got a good writing style going, I couldn\'t really notice any time where your first person veered off into third. So if it was done, it was done tastefully.
Please don\'t make me wait long. *pouts*
Btw, you\'ve got a good writing style going, I couldn\'t really notice any time where your first person veered off into third. So if it was done, it was done tastefully.
Please don\'t make me wait long. *pouts*
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are so cruel! How could you do that to Kit? Why couldn\'t he just run away with Nick? I am weeping due to the current fate of our poor little Kit. Hopefully what will happen to him in the institution will not add more cracks to his already fragile control over the voices that he hears. Even if it doesn\'t seem like it, I am enjoying your fic very much! What you have been writing has, so far, kept me very interested (even though there are certain events that I don\'t particularly want to happen). So, keep up the good work and also let some good things happen to Kit in the future! Awaiting good things to come!
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kit! I hope they don\'t make him leave. I also hope that Nick comes to his rescue. Kit needs all the support he could get. I absolutely love this fic, but if you have Kit sent away I will cry and then I will hate you forever (well not forever, just long enough for you to make up for it in another chapter)! Looking forward to more, soon!
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Pretty good start! I like where this is going. My only suggestion: might wanna work on the formatting. It\'s pretty hard on the reader to read it all when it\'s spaced that close together, \'specially if you\'re like me and read at 2:00 am after work. ^_^
Other than that, good work! Keep it up!
**Zeph**
Other than that, good work! Keep it up!
**Zeph**