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by SignsofDeath

person Kat
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OhmeGawds! Could it be? Brian!? BRIAN! <3 Think! You must get the next chapter up ASAP! I want to see the return of Brian! Please? Please!? D\'=
person aurora
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you run out of seeds just buy some more *wink*.....when is Brian comming back?..I wanna read about Brian!!! OK *breathe* I am calm....really I\'m calm........
person aurora
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ofcourse we\'ll read it dearie....liked the chappie...YEAH THAT WAS FUCKED UP *sniffle* poor Brian you are evil evil evil......i will be sittin here waitin for the next chapter then
person Kat
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awh... I\'m glad that\'s not my life. >>

Nice quote at the end! xD A very wise man indeed.
person Kat
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so sad! T.T Updates!? =D
person aurora
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooo another chappie......I think something did go on in this chapter looks to me like Kit is opening up a lil more to Brian and starting to remember stuff about being there before no more evil voices....am I reading to much into it?....me don\'t think so......anyway liked the chappie I hope it is a Kit/Brian pairing.
person aurora
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
goodness a lil hard on the reviewers yes? *shiver* me likes *chuckle* just kidding.....I think I will go with Brian and Kit for the pairing Nick has been away from the story too much and Brian sounds more interesting....so it is safe to say check back in a couple of days and a new chappie will be posted?
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are driving me INSANE. But I really like the story. You are terriblly unpredictable, and I am now hooked on the plot. Keep writing and I\'ll keep reading. And I really like the Nick and Kit pairing.
person Kat
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this story is really complex. ._. I\'m slowly understanding it, sometimes it\'s hard to distinguish what\'s a voive and what really is happening! It\'s great, please update!
person nea
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The last two chapters were excellent. There was a good flow to them. I like the little plot twist the guy now named Brian. You could maybe have Nick not visit for some time, and during that time Brian is slowly working on getting with Christopher. And once Brian has finally wormed his way in, Nick shows up! Hey, they\'ve got plenty of time with not much to do. And what\'s the deal with the aunt. So now she decides to pop back into his life and try to help him. What\'s motivating her to do this. After all we don\'t do things like that for nothing, for all things you get some kind of compensation. Whether it be monetary, material, or mental. Nice work on the last chapters.