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wheeee sex scene

Okay... that was a bit confusing... >> But still good, please update! <3

*shiver* talk about freeked out.....I kinda figured he\'d had something to do with the fire that killed his parents.....did you notice that the last chapter is posted twice.......wonder what Brian meant about the aunt.....aaahhh cliffies

Holy shit!! Does a chapter get anymore exciting? My god, there was so much going on, and I never even know which guy to root for to get Kit. Excellent fic!!!!

You posted some pretty decent chapters since I last reviewed, a lot of chapters actually. I\'m glad Kit\'s out of the institution, but living with his aunt, I don\'t know. She, for some reason, makes me think she\'s up to something. What\'s the real deal with her? How was she able to get Kit out of the hospital so fast? Also, my opinion on the pairing. My mind logically chooses Brian because with him Kit could almost lead a normal life if they both can stay out of institutions/hospitals. It seems that when they are together their, I guess you could call them, \"illnesses\' seem to lessen or almost completely vanish. Kit also already knows about how much Brian cares for him, and it\'s obvious that he has some feelings for Brian also. But, if he\'s with Brian they might not be able to live with each other. If Brian was put into another institution they might not be able to see each other again, unless Kit gets committed again. On the other side of the coin, my heart is reckless and want Kit and Nick to run off and live together forever. Nick is pretty much and unknown in this story, Kit\'s known Brian longer than Nick. Hopefully he would be a decent guy to Kit. If I chose Nick, it would be only to see what would happen. Even though with Nick there is the benefit of Kit\'s \'illness\' lessening, there is also the feeling that Nick wants to the keep the relationship on the \'down low.\' Hints would be: Getting close to him after everyone has gone into the house and letting go of Kit\'s hand once they get back to the house. If they did get into a relatrionship how long would it take for them to get it out into the open? I could go on and on, but I think the paragraph typed is enough for today so time to wrap it up. Choice for pairing: leaning towards Brian, still unsure. Love what you\'re doin\' and keep \'em comin\'! Later days!

Not a review, just some questions. A few questions about the aunt in the story popped into my head today and I figured I\'d ask them (see, I like your story so much I was thinking about it at work). Is the aunt getting paid to keep Christopher? I think in the last chapter you had written something about her husband had worked as a fisherman. You said something like it paid a good bit but not enough for the way she was living. Is she collecting on his parents insurance? Since Chris is underage, he would be unable to collect on any insurance or other monies left to him until he reached a certain age. But his caregiver would be given an allowance to clothe, feed, and house him. To me that would be a good reason for her to take in Chris. Am I even remotely close? I look forward to reading the next chapter, so update again soon.

OMG! This story is so great, seriously its sooooo good, please write more more more!
i love it, but can you please make sure Kit ends up with Brian? that would be super dooper.
i cant stop reading this!!!! You rock!

You are very, very evil. It\'s not fair that you would leave us hanging like that. I hope you write more, I love this story

This last chapter was great. I love the indecision that\'s going on in Kit\'s head. Who\'s at the door, Brian? Or is there someone new to add to the equation? If it is Brian, this will either cause some wonderful conflict or a nice little threesome that could develop over time. And boy do I love a menage a trois! If it\'s someone different, then who could it be? Another relative coming to claim Kit? Another potential love interest? Or even maybe something semi-supernatural, like a person with a voice like one in his head? You have a lot of options open on what direction you want to take. Hope I gave you a few ideas. Looking forward to more soon.

ACK! You must write! You terrible, wicked person. How could you leave off there? Please hurry with the next chapter. I beg you. Oh, and excellent job, as always.