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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMYGOD!OMYGOD!OMYGOD!OMYGOD! that was HOT! The sex scene! I Love It! (Im such a perv! *blushes* But who isnt? ^^ )
I love your story! I started reading it a few hours ago and I havent left the computer since! ^___^
Im going to continue my reading now.. Will leave a review later on! chao!
I love your story! I started reading it a few hours ago and I havent left the computer since! ^___^
Im going to continue my reading now.. Will leave a review later on! chao!
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO!! NONONOONO!! none of them can be dead! NOOO!
Must...continue.... to .... read...! Must read! OMFG! O_________o
Must...continue.... to .... read...! Must read! OMFG! O_________o
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If it\'s a sweet sex scene, I\'m in. If it\'s cruel, I\'m out. If chapters after it will be dark and angsty, definitely a nice sex scene.
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just thought I\'d point it out. *smile*
The last two chapters made me want to cry. Poor Christopher! And Gabriel... heh
I want to see someone hurt Nick! One of those *long* term tortures. Yessss. Hurt the boy!
*blink*
Oh, where was I? *confused* *shrug*
Anyways, keep up the good work!
The last two chapters made me want to cry. Poor Christopher! And Gabriel... heh
I want to see someone hurt Nick! One of those *long* term tortures. Yessss. Hurt the boy!
*blink*
Oh, where was I? *confused* *shrug*
Anyways, keep up the good work!
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG please please write more you are killing me *dramatic over dramatised death scene* okay okay so i didn\'t really die but seriously the pain of not knowing is horrible just when i started to really like all the characters you take them away!! you better bring Brian back.... plaese hes not really dead is he? lol i love your story technique it flows really nicely and i admire your having gotten so far. my storys only every last for like one chapter. *sigh* i love the story it is very well crafted and your spellin even without the spell check was pretty darn good! keep going i\'m sure others want to kow what happens as much as i do!! Great work keep it up!
^_~ p.s please don\'t kill Brian please *puppy dog eyes*
^_~ p.s please don\'t kill Brian please *puppy dog eyes*
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Got lost there for awhile, but I\'m back up to date!
Love how it\'s going so far, definitely.
A few side notes, you might want to go through and check spelling, a few words were off.
But, the sex scene was great! It was so sweet and, well... *shrug* And I understand how you felt about writing your first *detailed* sex scene. Wasn\'t too long ago I did my first. But you did very good with it.
Also, Water Writes... O.o I want to know what it is too... *sigh*
Anyways, keep up the good work, I look forward to your next chapter and what will happen to the boys next.
(btw, also love Tran and Elise. Nick is such a bad boy...*lol*)
Love how it\'s going so far, definitely.
A few side notes, you might want to go through and check spelling, a few words were off.
But, the sex scene was great! It was so sweet and, well... *shrug* And I understand how you felt about writing your first *detailed* sex scene. Wasn\'t too long ago I did my first. But you did very good with it.
Also, Water Writes... O.o I want to know what it is too... *sigh*
Anyways, keep up the good work, I look forward to your next chapter and what will happen to the boys next.
(btw, also love Tran and Elise. Nick is such a bad boy...*lol*)
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
for your firs time it was good Brian was very quiet.....why is Nick a bad guy what\'s up with the aunt......more give me \'nother chappie
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEeeEEEEe what are you doin stopping there T.T !!! *cling* keep writing!
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omfg loves loves <333 continue! :O
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is just a quick one, but I felt like I just had to tell you: That was one hell of a sex scene (especially considering it was your first one).