rate_review Reviews

yummy. XD hmm for once i dont have any coments. i love it. everything flows together and fits perfectly. although more description could be used in some parts, and the use of higher vocabulary would take it up even more. =D XD ^_^ ooo add a necrophiliac XD (im kidding, im SO kidding) altough a guy with naturaly blue hair woudnt be an entirely bad idea!, specialy if he was a really hot goth, and paired up with a girlish prettyboy XD *starts daydreaming* hehehe

ARGH! Of course I stopped reading the other day RIGHT before the chapter that starts explaining things! (18). But I\'m so happy to see that things are coming together! It was a fun ride, but plot is good too. =) I admit I\'m a little iffy on the whole \'randomly wander out of the forest right into the right town to meet Tran and Elise right after they figured out they needed to find them\' thing, but I\'m willing to go with the flow.

Dang, now I have to go back to work! Can\'t read more till later!

Poor Tran he really has passed throught ever possible hell, hasnt him?
I´m happy for Elise, at least his first time, his real first time, has been with Tran. :)

What was that about not reviewing for a while? Well, I wouldn\'t HAVE to if every chapter didn\'t throw me a CURVE BALL! *huff!*

Seriously, that\'s not actually a criticism... although I definately feel very lost after chapter 16. I like that you followed the insanity of 15 with a little bit of concrete background, about the night of Kit\'s fire... it made me feel more grounded. But then what, Nick is now a bad guy?! Help....

But I\'m not going to stop reading, or anything... =)

Oh, I am so loving this fic! I just read the first 8 chapters, and can\'t wait to read the rest. It\'s so well done. The first-person is interesting, I think it suits this story since so much of it is about what\'s inside Kit\'s head. I\'m liking it, even though I sometimes find myself wanting to get other perspectives, especially Nick\'s. It did seem like his attraction to Kit and that kiss by the river were kind of sudden, I wanted to know more about his feelings, why he seemed so drawn to Kit. But.... wondering just makes the whole thing that much more intriguing! I\'m such a sucker for slippery stories! Hard to pin down, you know? I do find myself occasionally hung up on some spelling problems, but definately not anything bad enough to put me off the story.

I think you\'ve done an excellent job of writing something that\'s enigmatic and totally interesting without going overboard with it; I think you have a good balance of teasing us with it, without making things incomprehensible just for the fun of it. Dunno if I\'m explaining myself very well... anyway, I really like it, and I\'ll probably waste the rest of my day off finishing it. =)

Great job!

*sigh* I\'m such a sap... chapter 12, \"Won\'t Forget\", just about made me cry... I\'m so attached to Kit already. Although I was definately thrown by the little side trip to the mental hospital... I love Brian to death but I feel like we just barely met Nick and then, woosh! See ya! But I\'m very happy to know that he\'ll be popping up again. I was bummed I missed out on the whole \'Kit and Brian or Kit and Nick\' debate...oh well.... I suppose it\'s too late for me to vote for a threesome...?

All in all, lovely so far, although the smut addict in me thinks you\'re a wicked wicked tease.

Back to reading!

AHH! Chapter 14!! Well, I guess my prospects for a threesome are looking up, eh? Yeehaw...

lol... seriously, I promise that\'s not the only thing I\'m looking for out of this story. =) (Although you\'re STILL a wicked wicked tease!) I am very intrigued about what\'s going to happen next and I\'m just glad I don\'t actually have to wait! I might have lost my mind... I find it very fascinating that Brian lost his family too, by the way... and I really wish Kit could go back and live with that family again. Screw the aunt!

Oh. my. god. That was a seriously creepy chapter. (15) I guess I have to take back my threesome comment... (well, a girl can dream, right?)... I mean, damn, I thought it was going to be BRIAN at the door! And then it was the CREEPY BURNING GUY from INSIDE KIT\'S HEAD!! ARRRGHH! But at least Brian showed up, I guess... and everyone just stood around apparently(?) calmly while he subjected them to crazy group hallucinations.. *sigh* I hope you realize my brain is starting to hurt *stern look* ... but I\'m having fun, so it\'s ok. =)

And I have to stop reviewing or I\'m never going to finish!

*cries* don\'t brun this story!! ITS SOOO GOOOD!! I LOVE IT! i\'m reviewing... please *gets on knees and bows head with hands ni the air* please i beg you DON\'T BURN THE DISK! *faints* *opens eye* please?..

OMG! I can\'t believe what is happening! o.O... *cries* i don\'t know HOW MANY times i have CRIED over this story.. it\'s so sad.. and the decription.. OMG! it\'s just awesome.. that\'s all i can really say.. every chapter.. every word... was just mind blowing... and even though I cried... I read on just to see what would happen next... now it\'s at a pause.. x.x... and you made a threat...x.X... and that isn\'t good.... *sniffs* I promise.. i\'ll review every chapter from this point on!

anyways... LOVED IT! like i said before ^.^\'.. and ... I can\'t wait for more! I really can\'t! So much awesomeness!

Lol.. welps.. later.. ((please don\'t be deleted!))

WOOP! they\'re not dead! I LOVE YOU! hahahaha ^^

Can\'t you killl Nickholas? I hate him! Make Christopher kill him! Bwhahaha! (just kiddin\')

Keep up the good work! ^__________^