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OMFG. THIS IS, BY FAR, THE MOST ORIGANAL STORY I HAVE EVER READ. ITS FUCKING AMASING. ITS LIKE SEX IN WRITTEN FORM. LOL. I like this new person, 'ace'. cant wait to read more on him.

Awww...did you give up this fic ? Too bad :/ It was so interesting !! I still hope you will update one day !! In my country, we say " l'espoir fait vivre " XD Anyways, that's very good like usual :)

Urm, yeah im still waiting on an update. Please hurry up soon, i had almost forgot what the name of this story is. But i looked it up on the search thingy and i found it...Unfortunatly ITS NOT updated...*frowns* but i'll check again soon, its probably been like 3 weeks though, so PLEASE hurry up. Thanks.

Hey there, again, yeah im that bitch that kept talking about the religion stuff....muhahahaha....*eivl smirk*. Anywho i fucking want you to UPDATE NOW!!! I like your story, but dam it remember that BRIAN IS THE MAIN CHARACTER...or i think he was...So please bring him back into this....and whatever you do, DONT, DONT EVER KILL TRAN AND ELISE or whatever, and of course never touch Brian or kit. If someone must die in the future, i say take out Alexis and Gabrial. Im already more in love with Ace, and the blonde dude, which i forgot his name. I like asses, and Ace does it all for me. baahahaha....ok, i like this story, will save it to faves, so update soon, or i will review more times, in more annoying ways...which will be very very annoying, even more so than this one...*evil grin* Yes i am one fucked up 17 year old female, with no life. Boy friend, is one stupid dumb fucked up jock who gets horny over a bag of hot cheetos, what can you expect? Lmao, anywho..enough of me just rambling on...please continue ok? OK!! you said we could ask for anything, and that was anything...DONT KILL ANOYONE, but if you must.....then take out Gabe and ALexis. There i've said it, i could bear parting with them, but it would be to painful to get rid of Tran (which i am slightly infatuated with...*wink*) and Elise, and i love Kit. I have a thing for brian, and i just know i want to marry Ace. Why cant these fuckers be stright? Err..wait..Maybe i should be asking....why cant these fuckers be real? lol ok i'll shut up now...bye!

Hey, urm kool story. Urm, i like it....I stoped at chapter 7 just to review, and sort of complain though, but dont worry. I will finish reading the rest....Anywho, my complaing is, stop acting like such a total fuckin atheist, and quit repeating that Religion is stupid and all that. ( hehe yeah i meant to sound crude, and rude, and evil....*wink) but seriously though, i myself am NOT a christion, im actually a fucking atheist, Anywho...I dont know, for all i know this story is complete, like i said im bearly reading chapter 7 and i stopped to complain. hehehehehehe...Just a tip for you...from me...You totally dont have to take it seriously.....butttttttt..........IF you choose to right other stories, then i suggest that you dont discriminate aginst religions so much, because of the fact that people wont like it. Yes, thats a gay excuse, but its true. As fucked up as religions are, even more so is people getting angry becaue they are judged, and yet they fuckin judge the whole fucky christian religion (and or others...ex....buddhism) anywho, i dont really care, im just saying i have some friends that would have gotten pissed off and would have stopped reading. I on the other hand dont give a shit and i wanna know what happens next, cause your story was pretty good. *wink* Yes thats me flirting..bahahah!! once again, its fine to state that they dont believe in or somthing...but speaking as though its a " a matter of fact" that religions are shitty...kinda gets to people....For all i care they can burn in hell...Im off to reading chapter 8...your story is good...seeing on how its 4:30 am in the fuckin moring and im still reading...so Congrats ont he story, and you can either choose to ignore me..(which im sure you will) or not...but either way...bah....bye!

! I got back from VayK and was vary happy to see you had updated. And the chapter wasnt that bad,,, you have obviously seen better days but it was still of obvious quality... and I think the puppy-dog pyjamas where a great touch, I love the name Edan. XD update soon please!

WARNING: if you do not update in two weeks I WILL take extreme measures and resort to groveling!... you have been warned *shifty eyes*

Lol! I love what you said at the end about \"it only being three pages\" I do that too. But for a first scene for sex I loved it. My first scene was confusing that much I know and now I haven\'t got a clue where that fic is, hahaha lost somewhere on the internet I guess. Great fic I love it, adios.

I loved chapter three so much and the rest I\'ve read so far, I\'m glad I foud this story it\'s so intriging! Hahaha, and don\'t expect flames, this fic is too good to be hated. But you can\'t avoid an open mind, ya know.

Yeah, it\'s me again. ^_^
I\'ve come to the conclusion that if I wait in between chapters, let you put out a few, it\'s a lot more fun to read. That and life keeps me busy. lol
Loved the scene with Nicholas. Tran is just sooo hot! I\'d have to say he\'s about my favorite out of them all.
As for another pov, the boy in the bed with the blond hair? Or Ace? New minds are fun to rummage through. Oh, and also, I haven\'t come across any chapters that suck in anyway, they are all very interesting, even the ones without sex scenes in them. I just love a good character growth scene, and a really good torture/death scene.
heh I\'ve got some major issues, but who doesn\'t?
Anyways, keep up the good work and I\'ll keep an eye out for new chapters!

I\'ve just read the new chapters, and you\'re just getting better and better! Im becoming an addict to your storys! O__o hehe ^^

Keep up the good work!