rate_review Reviews

I like this story very much. I hope you continue so that we can see what the other 8 are like. And also what they are meant to be and what role the unforgivables have in this. Is been a long time since you updated, but I hope you reade this review and continue you wonderful story. You really should write books! Your imagination is fantastic. Please continue!!

Hi, Kay,
I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section
I like it a lot, hope to see more of it in the future:)

omg, please continue, please. I love this story. Its awsome. I´m curently at chap. 29 and its the weakend, so I will be able to read the rest of it by tonight...and then? What am I supposed to do on sunday (I have no social life lol) so pleas update...soon...love you and this story.

Well, the first thing I have to say is that I read all 42 chapters in one night. The second is that your ideas are very creative and drawing that I find myself wanting to read more. My only problem, and I'm certain quite a few people have said this, is your grammar. Even simple mistakes are repeated, though it has lessened with each chapter. Some of the mistakes are funny "bowls of hell" for example, but I'm finding it somewhat irritating to constantly try to figure out what you meant to write instead of just reading it through. Your misuse of "to" and "too" is the main one I am seeing, but even a once over before you post it I think would be worth while.

I'm sorry if this sounds mean or something, but I do truly like your story and will continue reading it. I'm just a bit of a stickler for grammar and such I guess. You can do whatever you want with this review, but I just wanted to say it at least.

Continue writing,

Dhampir

Don't threaten us like that, not updating since you got reviews T_T
You know you have readers, a lot of ! Everybody doesn't have the time to review, or doesn't know what to say. I read your story (all the stories you write) but I usually don't review because I can't write in english. I read easily but writting is difficult, I really can't say all the things I would like to say to you ! If I try, you would spend one day trying to understand what I mean -__- !
I just want to say that even if they don't review, people read your story, and they like it. So please continue, you're a great writer, don't give up because of lack of reviews ^^ !
Kissu, Maaya.

Oh my God !! You actually update this story ! I can't believe it O_O
I love it so much and I thought you give it up. I'm sooooo happy ! Thank you Great Goddess !

dude you BETTER update. it's been a whole freakin year since i first started reading your story and by far your stories are damn well one of the bests. I love gabi, even though him and edan are a bit too wimpy sometimes. Ah well. Elise is awesomely kickass!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think i love the ones that hurt the most. sadistic arent i? And whats the deal with this whole thing? Are there gonna be more? And update soon please, AFF is seriously lacking some more good stories nowadays...

This is just such an excellent fic. I can't wait to see what happens between all of them. You've kept the storyline interesting throughout and the thoughts are so in depth and real. Great, great job you. :)

Hey, UPDATE NOW! IM NOT EVEN PLAYING...........NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please, oh please, oh please, oh please! Im so addicted...and its like...Yeah, you must update NOW! O_O

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG I LOVE THIS STORY. Dude, I cant express to you how hooked I am. I am completely infatuated with Ace, and with Tran. ANd yes, I am in love with the whole "bad ass with shy reserved kid" too. I love where you're taking this...And I cant wait for your next chapter, please update soon!