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gah! wheres the sex?? they make it to his room and they sleep?! damn it all! lol update again soon!

meep T_T so good. So sweet. T____T. I adore this story. Plz continu. -_-v

*pouts* Ummmm me thinks you forgot a scene is this chappie

whyd u stop ... this story was sooo cute..please continue

this is a wonderful story so far, and written in an unusual way (to me, at least) but it works.

and yes, please do update!

*hugs*

Buah...showers are my friend ^______^ keep it up! peace man

yay! i better see sex! lmao i\'m just messing! jenn needs to be stabbed. lol update again soon!

I love it! <3 This story is so addicting! There so... happy! n.n

I like it, tis good, need more!!!!

Your writing\'s still a bit amateurish, but I like it ^-^ The questions that Jesse asks himself bunched up in the first 4 or 5 chapters are a bit much, and you could probably have Jesse actually do something about it rather than just ask himself those things. To me, he comes off a bit pathetic there, but the whole conversation starting with him asking if Carson was gay was good. More confidence there, and it\'s hot ^-^ You should probably spend a few minutes going through your chapters and edit for grammar and whatnot also, but other than that, your story\'s great so far! I expect updates soon, *cracks a whip* ;), and more sex scenes darn it! They\'re hot :D