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Hi, Hakai,
I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,
This brilliant story appears to be abandoned, pity:(

I really like this story please continue.

*insert mushy, girly, fangirl squeal* This is such a cute chapter!!!! Again, no sex...*grumbles*, but that can be forgiven...So long as they\'re coming up in the next chapter or so..*nudge nudge* =D Anyways, now that I\'m getting a bit more used to your writing style, I\'ve realized that the little comments he makes to himself (i.e. The Brady Bunch, the girls\' names starting with L, and the guys\' names starting with C, etc. etc.) that I thought were irrelevant actually make the story more realistic and homey, for lack of a better word. Like...Something maybe your grandpa might tell you, spinning this grand tale about how he fell in love with the love of his life. I have to say, I really like this story. It gives me that pleasant, gooey feeling inside that the world can be seen as perfect in those moments.

Again, cuteness!! I have to wrap this review up pretty short, but it\'s all basically the same thing from the last chapter!! More tempting hotness (darn you, you evil sadistic author you!!!) and please, please update soon!!

AHH! You have to update soon or all my hair will be gone!! I will surely be yanking on it if I dont know wats going to happen later on! Yea and sex would be awesome! They sound really hot together! Very happy reviewer, Kat~ Well....its katlynn!

This story is so......I love it!

ahhhh... I like this fic soo much. -^_______^-
i like NIN too, so when i read it, i went *squeeeeee*
like a moose. jp. anyways, please update soon.
it would be most horrific of you to leave it as it is.
XD XD

I am so loving this story!

ehehehehe! I love it! I love being right all the time too. Woot! Plz, continue.

No! No sleep! T.T You\'re so meeeeeean! Just kidding! I was so scared you weren\'t going to update! o_o