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for Force Makes You Mine

by katonkunai

person DrowLithium
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, LOVE IT!

This one is even better then your twin story, if possible. You get so drawn into the story that it\'s impossible to even pause in the reading, and it makes you draw in a slow breath afterward. I prefer writing from the victim\'s PoV myself, but I love reading stories from the predator\'s point of view.

AWESOME work, and I hope to see more from you.
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You write as if you know what you\'re talking about.

And I like it.

This was one fantastic story, love.

It makes me wonder what else you\'ve got cookin in that brain of yours...
person Anon
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is just so very good, how it should be.
I like to see them broken.