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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooohhhhhhhhhh..............she\'s in twouble! i feel so sorry for her.
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good chapter. i love where the story is going
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the new name. it suits him.nice chapters. very creative.
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story.
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have a nice story going here, but you take to long to update. The longer between updates, the more chance there is of your readers forgetting about or losing interest in your story.
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very well writen chapter! i like how the character is developing! keep writing and keep updating this story especially!
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you cant wait to write it and i cant wait to read it please get the next chap. up soon.
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story please update! make it a long one!
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! This is one of my favorites on AFF. Keep up the writing and try and be nice to the kitty cat. = \'.\' =
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you must finish the next chapter, this is a great story. ^_^ You are a good writer, and I cant wait to read the rest. Eep! Im so excited! *Eats her pop corn.* ^_^ Update soon before my popcorn is all gone.