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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. I don\'t care too much for a chapter on Michael\'s language, but I can\'t wait for the update.
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story bloody rocks. I love the whole \'shadow-world\'. Amazing. Makes me want to be there as well, *grins*.
Uhhh-huh, I have a little request; I think you should write a chapter where they are at school. Perhaps in a class, teasing each other through the mind-bond... lol, that would be wicked awesome.
So, enough said. More soon?
Uhhh-huh, I have a little request; I think you should write a chapter where they are at school. Perhaps in a class, teasing each other through the mind-bond... lol, that would be wicked awesome.
So, enough said. More soon?
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is very... interesting. The first two chapters didn\'t interest me at all and I almost didn\'t continue reading the fic (especially with the title you had at the time/ I\'m glad you changed it!). I came upon your fic again today and decided to read it again. I\'m so glad I did because the story gets better and better after the first two chapters. I can hardly wait til you post your next update. I am currently enjoying what you\'re writing and can\'t wait to see what more you can do with this! Eagerly awaiting more, soon! Please!
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dun dun dun!! norris and jason just showed up!!!! omg! hmm most likely micheal will kick them out...unless he\'s kinky. XD update again soon please!
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THEY\'RE ENGAGED???!!! That was a shocker. You got my hopes up with finding out what Michael was. Anyways, I can\'t wait for the next chapter. This is getting good.
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude! theyre engaged! poor nick. one mintue he\'s on his first date the next he\'s engaged to a guy he barely knows! gees micheal couldve been a little more romantic about it...like telling nick that during sex. lol XD update again soon!
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m more curious about the fact that Nick can see objects in the shadows than the engagement. The engagement just reminds me of Luke and Laura from GH. Guy rapes you and you marry him! Love is so weird. Does Nick actually like Michael or is Michael making him feel that way?
Michael sounds like an incubus based on his sexual appetite. Of course, being in constant lust also makes him an average teenage guy!
Michael sounds like an incubus based on his sexual appetite. Of course, being in constant lust also makes him an average teenage guy!
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know that I\'m quickly becoming hooked to this story. You\'ve got my curiousity piqued and the chemistry between Nick and Michael SCORCHES!
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot. This is great! I can\'t wait to find out what Michael is though... It\'s bothering the hell outa me! And the thing about them being engaged was great!! *^^*Also Nick\'s grand parents.... Can\'t wait to see how they react. Can\'t imagine it\'ll be good thus Michael is bound to kick some ass, yes? Guess I\'ll have to be patient and find out, huh? Update soon!
Luck&Love
Luck&Love
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it, I only wish mine could shape up like yours