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Why do you do this to me?! MORE MORE MORE!!!

I love your writing!

Wow that is great maybe Mike will get what he wants from nick after all...he just a little closet satis(sp).

Your wish is my comand, well, in a manner of speaking. . . . . . . Yea, I know, I read too much, or is it that I\'m online too much?. . . . . either way, I don\'t care, Wanna ask why? If not, sorry, I\'m gonna tell you anyway. . . . . because I lurve all you people who update regularly, especially you right now,. . . . . .because you updated, and I read, and now I\'m givin\' you some feed back so that you\'ll do it again, and just because it is the least I can do to keep you motivated to write, aside from hunt you down, latch on to your legs and refuse to get off until you update. . . . . . . and threaten not to share my cookies, which I\'ve hidden in my coat. Anyways, thanks for updating, yet again, please continue, I really enjoy your work. And also, thank you for your posted thank you to me, I will do my best not to leave you without a review. Question: Why did Nick have to like being abusive to Jason? I know you can\'t reveal your plot, but I thought I\'d ask anyways.

I love you! Wanna know why? Cuz\' you updated, . . . . . . and your story keeps me interested, entertained, and enthralled. Update soon?

Although it took me three days to find time to read, I have fiinshed, and i\'m hungry for more. your writing technique is good, your characters have life and that brings it all together to create the perfection of fiction. Please update soon and tell us more about \'Micheal\' and Nick. By the way, was Nick\'s mother as he is, or was it his father, and if she was as Nick is, why didn\'t she protect herself from Nick\'s father? Well, G2G.

I really like your story and characters but something\'s bothering me about Nick. He seems like a Gary-Sue. How can anyone do magic on the first try. Even if magic was real, it\'s not possible. Don\'t feel bad. I still like his character.

This is my favorite story on AFF right now. I\'m interested to see who will be the more dominant. As the story goes on it seems Nick is becoming more and more dominant in the relationship. I\'m excited to see how their relationship developes and turns out in the end.

Wonderful! It\'s nice to see that Nick and Michael switched places. It\'s not normal for one person to be seme and one person to be uke all the time. Can\'t wait for the update.

hehe he\'s tryin to make babies!!! cute cute

Curiouser and curiouser. One of the reasons I like \"Michael\" is because he\'s what I call a grey character. Not all good. Not all bad. Not all evil. Not all altruistic. Multi layered. You\'ve definitely got me wondering with this last chapter though. And \"Michael\" better be careful, Nick is getting mighty pissed....