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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i was really getting into it and then it stopped... that was a lsight bummer keep up with the wonderful work. It rocks!
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it.
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think that this sentence:
“Not really, but I like it even less seeing him touch you.”
should be re-worded to something like this:
\"not really, but I like seeing him touch you even less.\"
or something like that. It seems to flow better...
Hmmm Brand New is kind of Indie Rock... a lot like Taking Back Sunday only without the screaming. I don\'t know. I suck at describing a bands sound. All I can say is that they are AMAZING. At least in my opinion.
“Not really, but I like it even less seeing him touch you.”
should be re-worded to something like this:
\"not really, but I like seeing him touch you even less.\"
or something like that. It seems to flow better...
Hmmm Brand New is kind of Indie Rock... a lot like Taking Back Sunday only without the screaming. I don\'t know. I suck at describing a bands sound. All I can say is that they are AMAZING. At least in my opinion.
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmm. good. I had accidentally gone back to the 18th chapter, before I read this one, and reread the part where Michael had talked about finding a way to get Nick to act. So I kind of had that idea that it was all a ploy or get Nick to finish the zorey ceremony. I like the fact that you put that in there. because a person forgets. and then Michael tells him about it.. and you remember. that\'s always good. when you don\'t just throw something out there. but you leave hints for the situation.
Yes my name is long. But it\'s from the best brand new song ever. And at least you don\'t have to write it every time you review a story. haha.
Yes my name is long. But it\'s from the best brand new song ever. And at least you don\'t have to write it every time you review a story. haha.
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squeee, I\'m so happy that Nick turnd out to be the dominent one. I hadn\'t seen that one coming. More soon?
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this IS interesting
i like the complexity of Michael\'s personnality
and the fact that Nick is the dominant one
they have both changed so much
i hope that Michael still stays a little strong (not mean but strong)
and I kinda hope that Nick expresses his emotions more
anyway
can\'t wait
na
i like the complexity of Michael\'s personnality
and the fact that Nick is the dominant one
they have both changed so much
i hope that Michael still stays a little strong (not mean but strong)
and I kinda hope that Nick expresses his emotions more
anyway
can\'t wait
na
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I loved this latest update. It was just too cool. I can\'t wait for the next update!
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Any time that an author can find a way to insert the word kaleidoscope into their story. I\'m in love. So it\'s good. and yes I think he will hit him. it\'s the whole defiance thing.
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, at least you know YOU will get the reviews you seek!
Like mine. I always knew ole\' Mikey would turn on Nick as soon as Nick fought him or talked back. So this is no big surprise. And please don\'t shoot me but you know me with sex and violence..... even though my heart is sick at what Michael is doing to Nick, my *cough* hormones say, the tension and violence is hot.
Yes, I\'m a sick puppy. Please continue writing anyway, cher.
Like mine. I always knew ole\' Mikey would turn on Nick as soon as Nick fought him or talked back. So this is no big surprise. And please don\'t shoot me but you know me with sex and violence..... even though my heart is sick at what Michael is doing to Nick, my *cough* hormones say, the tension and violence is hot.
Yes, I\'m a sick puppy. Please continue writing anyway, cher.
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s too cruel. And I can\'t believe Michael would actually hit Nick because they\'re Zorey. He even told Nick he\'d never hurt him. Anyways, you can\'t leave it there.