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This is really good. I really like Jason and Nick. I\'m so so on Micheal (can\'t remember how to spell his reall name) and I\'m begining to like Noriss (I don\'t remember if that\'s the right name) now that it seems like he and Nick are related. Please e-mail me when you update. I would like to continue reading this. You are really talanted. The tital is really sweet in a way it matches the story. The characters, all of them, are wonderful, as well as are the places and species. I myself would write Original stories but my friends, girlfriend and cuzin usually just read fanfictions. Once again this is really good. Keep up the great work and Please do e-mail me when you update and anyother time if you want to.

Update!!!!!!!!! I\'m so happy!! So, I finally got a poem up, it\'s called Forgive Me. If you want to check it out and leave me a review, I\'d appreciate it.

Good, as always. More soon?

Updates!!!!!!! Lots of \'em!!!!! I lllluuuurrrvvv you!!!!!! Keep up the bestes best work!!!!!!!

I\'ll try that. I haven\'t been on it a while, so i got the message late. Thank you. . . . *Throws out more cookies*

Still asking for subcat, even under \'Original\'. I\'ll just see if I can wait until I go back to \'my own\' house and see if my internet server will be of better help. If you know of any thing else to help, advice is very apreciated. Love the story!!!!!!!!!

very good keep going... thanks for the review on my story

Wonderful chapter. I feel sad for Norris, he seems like the only one who\'s not \'spellbound\', so to say. I think Jason should be more kind to him... Uhhh, Some JasonxNick in the next chapter? *winks*

Didn\'t Michel say there were no showers? only baths that had to be perpared from water brought in and heated?
I just thought I\'d clear up that, I really like this chapter poor Nick still fearing being hurt by Michel.

Thanks, dramaelf, for pointing that out. O.o That is one reason why a person shouldn\'t write when they are dead tired and in pain. *sigh*
Anyways, I fixed it(ch21) and just changed the wording.

desperatedesire_maliciousintent, I changed the sentence, liked yours better *refer to previous sentences*. I would say I will write one of these days when I\'m not dead tired, or in pain, but I doubt it would ever happen. I live on a farm and, when there is a crisis every five minutes, quiet doesn\'t always happen.
*is writing a new chapter* Hoping to have the new chapter out tonight.