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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s finally over. Great to end it with smut. Great the way you tied all the loose ends together. Great twist about Norris. Just.... GREAT everything, lol!
I\'m sorry I didn\'t comment as much, I didn\'t have net for a while but I\'m glad I have it now.
I\'m sorry I didn\'t comment as much, I didn\'t have net for a while but I\'m glad I have it now.
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have read the hole story and i liked it very very much definatrly keep going and make a sequel, this is so awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
post soon
bye bye
post soon
bye bye
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sequal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >_< I am in love with the characters in this, it is sad to know your going to end it soon when i\'ve just started reading it, but that is life. It has been a pleasere to read and i hope you get thenext chapter up soon. xxxx Oh and please, please, please don\'t let Norris die, pretty pease! Let Jason come and help him or something! /\\_/\\
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You cannot just quite after one more chapter! There is soooooooooo much story that you haven\'t told yet! You give little hints about things that could make this story hugh, yet you aren\'t going to continue! You are differntly going to need a sequal, there are so many different plots that haven\'t been resolved yet that you will not have to worry about people getting more. Looking forward to reading more, happy writing.
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Totally amazing story. I love this story, so much that I think I\'ll read it again. I can wait for the updated. The slash is good. I really wait to know what is happening to Norris and if Jason will finally tell Norris.
I think that both Nick and Norris are both Athan\'s offspring. Both \'ENCHANCERS\'....what else could they be?MORE UPDATES.
I think that both Nick and Norris are both Athan\'s offspring. Both \'ENCHANCERS\'....what else could they be?MORE UPDATES.
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good imagery at the beginning there. When you described Tsion\'s true form. The Norris back story is really interesting. I can\'t wait for the next/last chapter. And PLEASE do a sequel. If not about Tsion and Nick, maybe you could write one with Athans(not sure if that is spelled correct but I don\'t want to go back and make sure at the moment.) backstory.. or side story. Both would be preferable.
Oh and you get props for using the world Malicious in your little paragraph at the bottom when bring up questions for the next chapter.
Oh and you get props for using the world Malicious in your little paragraph at the bottom when bring up questions for the next chapter.
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Duuuhh. Sequel. Good chappie.
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, as always ;D
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it when I don\'t have to sit around for weeks waiting for an update. And you never dissapoint. I was wondering. How exactly do you say Tsion? I don\'t want to be saying it wrong so i normally just say Michael in my head every time I see it.
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Squeee*, loved it! More soon!?