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for My Beloved Shadow

by Asasina

person janette
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not usually into non-con but you\'ve seemed to have caught me when I\'ve been craving it like crazy and this story is SO hot so far. I\'m looking forward to more, though I have no idea what a \"meili\" is....
person Mouse
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGWTFORGASM

hott story
person buho
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it you should really continue the story i can\'t wait to see what happens to nick and to see what happened between jason norris and micheal back in the day can\'t wait til you update hope to see it soon
person Peleia
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A titilating start. =) A few little grammar things, but nothing too bad... What I\'d really like to know is a bit more about the relationship between these guys! They\'re on the same team, but are they friends? Just teammates? Enemies? Definately curious about the dynamic.
person Mewa
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww poor nick!!! ;-;
person Rose_red
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I guess. I just wanted to give you a little physiological note, no man would be able to get hard after being raped with no prep and no lube. It\'s a very small hole, and unless they\'ve got cocks the size of worms, I doubt that he would be able to get over the agony enough to become erect.
person Yue
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eeeek RAPE!