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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! So hot, so sensual...so incredibly SWEET! So Michael does seem to have a soft side (or at least when he\'s around Nick)! Great job so far....PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DO ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON! Also I was thinking about your title request, how does \"In the Shadows\" sound?
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Usually I have problems with N/C, but this is written nicely enough that I can (and willingly do) enjoy it. On a completely random note, my muse (who just so happens to think she\'s on vacation) has suggested that you call this piece Showers of Blood. I have no idea why. ^^\'
Chibi
A.K.A.Your newest groupie.
Chibi
A.K.A.Your newest groupie.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i\'ve missed so much. lol poor nick! poor thing was scared out of his mind! and damn straight dont give in to michaels punk behind! resist!! lol too late for that anyway. lol what language is micheal speaking? update soon! aww maybe they can be a cute couple and nick wont have to fear for his ass. lol XD
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. XD You had a few mistakes, like using apostrophes(spelling?) where there aren\'t supposed to be any.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'LL GIVE YOU YOUR ONE REVIEW!! I LUV IT!!
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good so far. I still like IS better though. Although your grammer and form is definately getting better ^^
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Magic! Now I\'m curious as hell what Michael is if he\'s not human. You\'ve hooked me. Yep, definitely hooked me.
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story in the first ch. however the grammer and writing were a bit screwy but the second ch. is really good and I hope that you continue writing.
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH!! I LUV IT!! YES!! What is Michael!!??!!! WHAT IS HE!!!! I can\'t wait to find out!! And POOR NICK!!!
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Must...find...out...what...happens...NEXT!!!! I feel sorry for Nick, I hope that Michael won\'t hurt him too much :(. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!