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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot! XD more touchy feely!!! lol
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::Sniffle:: Your just pure evil!!! Oh well, I guess I have to wait and see what he is, and why Nick is tied into all this!! Unless.... out of the goodness of your heart... maybe... want to tell me... PRETTY PRETTY PRETTY PLEASEEEEE!!!
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, this story is so beautiful. I hope you continue to write more. I can\'t wait until your next update!
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this has got to be one of my fav stories so far on this site, seriously keep it up maybe a bit of bondage or maybe Micheal could let nick take control some time? jsu sum ideas lol
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmz..maybe take one of those words as a title? or the meanings.. :}
A realy interesting story! I love it! And you update G00d :D
A realy interesting story! I love it! And you update G00d :D
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You ruined the name Nick for me. It\'s not because of the rape, or the gayness, but because of the horrible grammar and the suffocating cheese factor. WTF. Meili? You would\'ve done fine without that.
Also, your writing doesn\'t flow, it feels as if you just put random sentences together. I don\'t really know, there\'s just something funny about your writing.
There are some parts that are particularly good, but then there are some that just suck ass, like the second chapter.
Also, your writing doesn\'t flow, it feels as if you just put random sentences together. I don\'t really know, there\'s just something funny about your writing.
There are some parts that are particularly good, but then there are some that just suck ass, like the second chapter.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.o;;
if Michael is supposedly this powerful being, why did he need help with restraining Nick to begin with...
if Michael is supposedly this powerful being, why did he need help with restraining Nick to begin with...
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok. review time from moi!::: First off. good story it has great potential and i do hope you
continue with it. you made a request for any ideas for a better title well you could try calling
it \"My Meili Ceylo\" which is in the languag you used \"My beloved lover\". but hey the choice is entirely
yours after all you are the author.l so anyway update soon!
continue with it. you made a request for any ideas for a better title well you could try calling
it \"My Meili Ceylo\" which is in the languag you used \"My beloved lover\". but hey the choice is entirely
yours after all you are the author.l so anyway update soon!
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Humm, I getting more and more curious about Michael...
Please update soon ...
;)
Please update soon ...
;)
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story cant wait for the next chapter.