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July 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
you realize there is no actual fucking in the first or second chapter so finding out his ass hurts in the third chapter is a complete what the fuck moment.
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December 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I started reading the second chapter but couldn't get through it. I think the story would benefit from a proper rewrite a few years down the line. The idea isn't bad, but the delivery feels like a young teen's writing.
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi , Mitsukai ,
I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,
This story is pretty cool, even with some mistakes. Wish you continued on the sequel, but can't have it all:)
Thank you
I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,
This story is pretty cool, even with some mistakes. Wish you continued on the sequel, but can't have it all:)
Thank you
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much :) I can\'t wait until you update the sequel, please hurry!
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very good :) I have only read first five chapters, but I will definitely finish reading this... It\'s very interesting! :)
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m soooo Sorry it\'s taken me so long to come back to your story!!!!! Don\'t remember if I thanked you for your review, but thanks again. I would like a sequel very much!!!! And just for old time\'s sake, you can have some choco\' chip cookies to go on. . . .
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September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank god he ain\'t gonna die any time soon! *hug* Well done on this so far, i\'ve seen you have the next part up now, I can\'t wait to read it! I love this story to pieces, thankyou so much for writing it and doing it so well! It has been pleasure to read. xxxxxxxxx
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am both sad and glad this ended, cause it\'s a nice ending, but at the same time I want to read more. I hope you bring the next story up soon:D
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yah that was so much fun to read and I remeber how I start reading this and wondering were is this going to go it was such a 180 from what I thought the story was going to be about good job and now I\'m tired and need sleep 1am wow, yes time for bed. and i hope your make a sequile that would be socool.
ja-ni
Dramaelf
ja-ni
Dramaelf
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thank you for writing this fantastic story and i hope you wil write a sequel and post soon
bye bye and keep up the good work :)
bye bye and keep up the good work :)