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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey dude. Good job man, props. I like\'d your characters, and congrats on being the first good origional fanfic I\'ve read. See you in Psych.
Laura
Laura
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, you\'ve definately gotten me intrigued with all the flashbacks! I\'d like to read more.
I did have a bit of trouble following it, although I know part of it was the formatting issue-- made it hard to read. The patchwork/flashback structure can be tricky, but I couldn\'t really tell how much of my confusion came from that, and how much was because of the formatting. But a really great start, I hope you write more!
I did have a bit of trouble following it, although I know part of it was the formatting issue-- made it hard to read. The patchwork/flashback structure can be tricky, but I couldn\'t really tell how much of my confusion came from that, and how much was because of the formatting. But a really great start, I hope you write more!
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good start ^^ i\'m interested in reading more keep it up.