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for Take Me Home

by leanntwilight

person Honey Nut Loop
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh update update update. That was fantastic but damn the person who invented cliff hangers.
person Peleia
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was EVIL! I hope there\'s going to be more?! I really enjoyed it... first person tends to bug me but you did a great job, very vivid and I\'m really left with the feeling that I know a lot about Neil even without any details about him... gotta scamper off to read your other stuff. =)
person summerraen
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All right; quickly now! New chapter! Go go go go! Aw you bum, leaving us hanging like that ;)
person Lianelle
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the very nice visuals (in my head that is) created by your words. I got hooked on your GL story (giving credit where it\'s due, i.e., Janette\'s rec. so I\'m also really happy that it still in the works somewhere) but in the meantime, this will definitely do nicely (or not-so-nicely...). I see that you share the same sense of where to cut up a part so as to cause maximum frustration on the reader\'s part (given that it can go in so many directions now...) but hey waiting\'s half the fun... Any chance of one of your deliciously alluring picture to go with?
person Minako
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"Later, Peccavi. ^___^\"

grmpflgrmjhui(/&(((%(GKJD()(T!!!!
>_<; scraps at the botom of the screen and clicks repeatedly on the button bar to go down.... Where is the rest?
Meaaaaaan! You are meaaaaaaan. *goes sulk and glare in a corner with the rest of people*
person Minako
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The angry glaring monster of the impatient readers apparently decide to eat the rest of my review. O_o; Sorry!
person Anon
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wait is this the end?
person nea
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Oh so very nice! You have definitely peaked my interest and it kills me that you stopped there. Hopefully the next chapter will give all of us what we want. Anticipating great things to come!
person Kikvws
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waaa, that was so good!!! Damn you for the cliffy, but I cant wait for more!!!
person Dana
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I actually entered to read this story because of the summery i didn\'t know who the author was until i read your note.
lol guess it means that everything you write -in the present and in the future-I will love it.
Really good beginning!! it\'s really exiting and even though i read the summery i didn\'t expect to pull out a knife!
Please update soon I\'m in suspense
BTW-I never forget GOL either :-)