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for Take Me Home

by leanntwilight

person renee
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can I get wow-wee? ;x Too cute. I love little boys who can take care of themselves and not only that but also *grin* give back 10 times more than what was taken. I am also interested in knowing what will happen to William but he hasn't grown on me yet for me to want to keep him around. So, Niel can do what he pleases, just don't kill without causes!
person minorind
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear peccavi, I'm so sorry for any trouble I might cause, but I can't stop myself from writing this to you.

I am a Vietnamese student who (by accident) had a chance to read "Take me home". And... how to say... I loved it and really, really want to have your permission to translate it into my mother language and post it in some Vietnamese forum. Because your email is hidden so I can't do anything but shamelessly ask you in this topic.

Hope to hear some good news from you.

Have a nice day.
person Coiria
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Extremely twisted . . . so why am I grinning? I feel vaguely badly for William, but the doorman and Gerald were corrupt and sort of deserved it, at least in a fictional story. I don't think I want to see William die, though. Now if Neil made a mistake, thought he'd killed William but failed, and eventually got his own back . . . that has potential. Something twisted, anyway. And you love twists, non?
person Uncertainties
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
umm. . . wow! That tottaly took me off gaurd, omg. I loved how you turned the tables that was soo amazing! Keep up the awesome work!
person SimoneV
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... omg.


...omg. this was one of the most twisted fanfictions I\'ve ever read and liked! O___O I REALLY didn\'t see that one coming... omg, GREAT story! lol that was so weird XDDD very hot too... *drools*
person mila
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg, really didn\'t see that coming! I loved that Neil is not the poor victim! great story! see ya! ^^
person Sara
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooohh finally a story from you the elusive author!! hehehe glad to see that you\'re back and good to know that you haven\'t forgotten about GoL.
Interesting story btw, i would like to know more about \'Neil\' like why he gets off on killing others and what drove him to it in the first place.
Hoping for more.... :)
person Jayn
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Twisted. But interesting. I never guessed that!! ^_^
person Happy Lama
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re just gonna end there?!?! O_O NYOOOO *pokes you with a stick* keep writing pleeeeeeeze
person Shaznay
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved it! Keep going, PLEASE!!!