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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god, that was one of the most heart warming, wonderful stories i have ever read. I have no words to describe it other that wow. You should truly send it into a book company so they can publish it for all the people around the world. Wonderful job. It made me cry.
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well written and immaginative. I love visual writing with strong, interesting characters. Good job!
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was beautifully written, this chapter. Or maybe I should say this particular character called Marzi who had no magic. Or maybe the magic is in your writing? Whatever it was, it was beautiful. Especially the part at the end beginning from \'As an adult...\' I am not fully an adult yet, still in my very early twenties and a student to boot, yet, this lack that Marzi feels, I can somehow relate to it. As a person, I am much more like Pepper, perhaps that is why Marzi captures me so much. All I can say is Marzi is one of a kind. Thank you for sharing him online.
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am brand new to this site, having only been told about it two days ago. But this is one of the first stories i have read here. And this is my review. This story, while dark and...evil, you might say, is a masterpiece. I read the whole thing through and cried at the end. I love this story, even if the ending isn\'t quite as happy as i would enjoy. You have an amazing gift. I don\'t mean that lightly. I fear that this will sound silly, but your writing is something that i think others would enjoy. I congratulate you on completing this work. It was a pleasure to read.
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WoW!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought that was awsome, very depressing, buy awsome. When\'s the novel coming out? ^_~
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Cool ending!
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Oh wow, this story was so tear wrecking...I cried ^^;;;; eh...yea...well it was wonderful! Will you continue it? that\'s be very nice to read if you continued...not very good with reviews... <<;; Well laters for now! ~Tsu-chan
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an entertaining and well written story. Thank you for posting the remaining chapters.
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...You finished it. I don\'t know whether to feel happy or really upset. ^^() I don\'t even remember pressing the \'next chapter\' button at the end of each chapter, I was that lost in the story... Another excellant job. The ending was so pretty, but so bittersweet, and so perfect. :D I give you many kudos~