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for Genteel Obsession

by Scribe

person Fly
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is at once alluring, captivating and slightly disturbing. Your Stephen is slightly reminicent of an ex-lover I once was with, I can hardly call him an ex-boyfriend it wouldn\'t fit.
He too strangely enough was an avid collecter of butterflies.
Good work, I look forward to the next chapters.
person Tauria
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say, you have me hooked on your work. It is very well written and thought out. I like the way it flows and the atmosphere it creates for me. It\'s been a while since i\'ve run across good work and this will truly be a shining beacon in the void of bland works. Thank you and I look forward to the next chapter with much anticipation. Continue with your successful writings and take care,

Squirrel*
person Anon
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. All of the characters are really well written. Can\'t wait to read the next encounter of Stephen and Mina!
person Larissa
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interseting story...I\'d like to see where it\'s going. I hope you update!
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