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I'm so glad you updated this! Stephen is such an intriguing character, and Mina has spink! More, pleas? ;)

This is excellent. I am very much looking forward to your next update.

Oh my goodness...Poor Mina doesn't stand a chance, she has two of the most devious 'hunters' after her, Stephen...and his lackey, Dominic.
I'm really interested to see how they try and catch her...and also a little surprised that Mina hasn't thought, even once, that the rose might well be from Stephen, seeing as how he's taken a sudden shine to her!...And no-one else seems to be overly excited at the news that the 'boss' is openly being seen going out of his way to take her to and from work....I know in the place where I work, all us women would be abuzz at gossip like that! lol...
All in all a very, very good read. Really gripping. I love the way you also have the characters 'speak'...and then let us readers in on their real 'thoughts'...A little touch of excellence there!
Hope the next update won't be too long in coming...but this story is so good, I'm prepared to wait!

THIS STORY IS AMAZING! AHH! I bookmarked it. Please write more. Pleaseee.

I'm really, really enjoying this. The description of Stephen's childhood, the butterflies. It's like..."Silence of the Lambs" meets "American Psycho!" Your main character is so cold and delicious. Would love to read more.

~Enthusiasto

nice story hope u come back to update it really good

Nice work the plot just hooked me in please update soon

just when it was getting good..it\'s no more

please continue this story!

Oh, I really do hope you continue this story soon! Your writting style is wonderful! This story has me on edge already! Please continue!