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for Genteel Obsession

by Scribe

person Catz33
schedule September 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great story. I also read the next three chapters on your website. Hope you finish it one day.

schedule February 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am a HUGE!!!! fan of your stories. If you don't update this story someday I might die it's sooo good and well written. I hope you finish it or at least add the rest of the chapters (i've read chap 25-27 on your website) and I really wanna know what happens.
person Amy
schedule August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Why is this not updated? It is better than more than half of the fics on here. Update this please!
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Even though I don't normally read anything that's not slash, I have to say that this story is my favorites. I just wish you'd finish it; it's great. :-) My heart aches for poor Mina. Please, please, please! Continue with the story. Even though it's been a (few?) months you can do it! I believe in you. Don't abandon it.
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just wanna say that I like many people really like your story and was wondering if your going to continue it, if not could you let us all know we'd really appreciate it =) love ur story!
person kitty
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love the story so please please dont give it up!!!! please update soon!!! it is really great!!!!!
person Rosei
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can see it all now!!!

He rapes her. She likes it!!!! The driver rapes her. She likes it!!!

She makes an offer they can't refuse!!!

1) She will live with them out in the open/public. Have her own room, car, days off.
2) Have an open and willing sexual relationship in exchange for what she desires.
SECURITY!!!! And a job and a condo or house for when he tires of her in exchange
for keeping his rich, privileged @ss out of the slammer!!!! HA!!

Works for me!!! I can even see her growing on the dude!!! Hmmmmm.... I can see her becoming addicted to... orgasms!!!! HA!! Yup!!

A really fun and creepy story!!!! Love the Gothic feel. I thank you for writing it and hope to navigate your website soon to find more. I love the rich dude. I love the relationship he has with his driver. A fan request would be of course a future slash/homoerotic scene between them. HA!

Thanks again!!
R

I have to thank Lambert for recommending this story on her authors page. THANK YOU LAMBERT!!!!!
person ....
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story..but will there be any romance between stephen and mina?..I hope so, and i kinda hope stephen gts enough feelings for mina, that he wont want anyone else touching her, even dominic..I'm very much a one girl one guy kinda person :) I really like it anyway, even if the outcome I'm hoping for doesnt come up. write more please!
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Creepy. Why don't you have that captives story and professor professor up on this site? They are good as well.
person Sweet123
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A masterpiece but as smart as Mianna is, she doesnt conform to them even knowing that she wont escape alive. Very interesting