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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update again! I want to know what happened!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice.I would like more please.
BYE-BYE.
BYE-BYE.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story, it needs a little editting on grammar and capitalization, but it\'s really interesting. Can\'t wait to the sequal;0
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OKay, good idea and all that. But you keep promising long chapters where are they???
--I only want long chapters cuz I like your story...
Eve ^^
--I only want long chapters cuz I like your story...
Eve ^^
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
don\'t know what to say but am lovin the story and hope you decide to update.
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that a deep story you got going, kep it up it really interests me
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o.o; Nice story and do a lil spellchecker btw ^^;
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An alright story, but it would make for a better read if you tried a little something called a spellchecker. It\'s annoying to have to stop every few moments and re-read a sentence or have Things Capitalized For No Reason then no capitalization at the beginning of sentences.
...At very least, change \"rapped\" to \"raped\" in your story summary; it turns people away to see errors from that early on in the read.
...At very least, change \"rapped\" to \"raped\" in your story summary; it turns people away to see errors from that early on in the read.
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
one cant help but feel sorry for jacob, but is how old is he?