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for Teetering

by evilindsey

person Marcus
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm! That\'s really hot! Good job. 1000 props.
person Siarra
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great fic! I absolutely adore it... It was so well written and your style of writing is great.
The fic itself was hot and very sweet. Every insomniac should be entitled to some of that. I\'d love to know if there is going to be continuation for this and I really recommend that you\'d at least try it. You have a good thing going on with the characters and the chemistry between them is awesome. Not to mention that the ending was just an invitation for readers to start begging for a sequel...
person Anonymous
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really really good! You should definently continue! :)
person aurora
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*shiver* nice
person Mewa
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD that was great! woot!! so is there a possiblitly that u\'ll add more or not? i wanna know if something happens between him and dan! lol
person aguaverde91
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow....that was....wow....I LUVED IT! u should write more, please?
person Xtreme17nc13
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue this. I loved it! Please?
person Heather
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i don\'t have much to say about your story except that it\'s hot! is this gonna be a multi-chaptered fic or a one-shot? i really hope you write more. i wanna see what happens when he wakes up.