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by Firered

person Kim
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the sex scenes themselves, but I found the circumstances a bit hard to believe. I\'m the type of person that likes fantasies to be somewhat believable and i don\'t think that this really was. Cita was an enjoyable character on the other hand, and i\'d love to read more about her and her adventures.
Kim
person OriginalSinner
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOO.K. *phew* now that was a good story... and the handcuffs in the bedside drawer? *gushes* A girl with a mind of my own! You sinful thing ~_^ ... Why the hell have you got no reviews?????????!!!!!!!
person OriginalSinner
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit! I\'ve only read the first chapter girl but this ones going on my recommended reading....hmmmm... now for that cold shower....
person Robert
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is good, I don\'t know if this was a first story or one written long ago and just recently found again. Either way its well done for a single story. I wouldn\'t really say its PWP, it has some plot, but not really much. If it were made into a complete series, I would say this is close to a perfect first chapter or prolouge. It doesn\'t drown you in a story, and has life-like action in it but not so much that it becomes too much. This is a perfect stand alone story, but does lend itself to wanting a continuation.