errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
schedule
July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, love it... as usual! Hope RL won\'t treat you too bad and know I\'ll be waiting :-) But the longer the wait, the more delightful the pleasure... The various players are now on stage and ready to begin their deadly game and I still have lots of unsolved questions so I\'ll tune back in regularly. I just really like this original addition to the Nocturne-verse.
Que le voile de la destinee se dechire et laisse transparaitre les attractions reelles
Que le voile de la destinee se dechire et laisse transparaitre les attractions reelles
schedule
July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*waits patiently for further chapters*
I sooo can\'t wait to read more. Will Brodie and Morgan die...
I sooo can\'t wait to read more. Will Brodie and Morgan die...
schedule
July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*pouts* That\'s an awful way to end the chapter. Good luck with RL, and I hope you can post up more chapters soon. You know I\'ll be waiting here patiently.
Your loyal fan, always!
Your loyal fan, always!
schedule
June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooops. Another Black Widower story I was totally unaware of. XDDD ^__^ Hopefully with some Dimitri in it? Poor Dimitri always gets eclispsed by Angelo, but I think he deserves a little better. Will this story have more Dimitri? Anyway... post more so I can know. XDDDD
schedule
June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Lianelle, you have devoted fans. And we will haunt you if you don\'t come around at least once in a while. *smile*
This last chapter definitely left me wanting more. Lots more! It\'ll be interesting to see what it\'ll be like for Morgan to meet back up with Mackie once he\'s changed. Wonder how Mackie will feel when he finds out that Morgan has been ordered by Fredo to kill him. *Waits patiently for next chapter*
Mean while, I go to your website and check out all the pretty stories there. *grins* Great site, by the way.
This last chapter definitely left me wanting more. Lots more! It\'ll be interesting to see what it\'ll be like for Morgan to meet back up with Mackie once he\'s changed. Wonder how Mackie will feel when he finds out that Morgan has been ordered by Fredo to kill him. *Waits patiently for next chapter*
Mean while, I go to your website and check out all the pretty stories there. *grins* Great site, by the way.
schedule
June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damned! and re-damned... RL just plain sucks sometimes... On one side it once again prevented me from reviewing earlier (which unfortunately might happen again since it\'s getting slightly insane right now...) On the bright side, I got two new parts to read (devour would actually be more appropriate). And, what I can say... It just keeps me wanting more! There are plenty of stuff you just barely hinted at that I\'m dying to see developed (I\'m sure Angelo and Weasel have their own little scheme well in place already), lots of various players meetings that have yet to come and that can only foresee your very own brand of angst/love/lust that I love. Please don\'t get discouraged, and know that, to the risk of sounding selfish and greedy (well, for your stories, I don\'t mind!), you have devoted readers that have developed a definite taste for the sweet and spicy words that you spin so deliciously... We will allow for some RL disturbance (I\'m in a very generous mood today) but we\'ll come haunt you if you starve us of our Nocturne fix :-)
S\'il vous plait, entendez la supplique des ames damnees pour lesquelles ces ecrits representent un morceau d\'ectasy
S\'il vous plait, entendez la supplique des ames damnees pour lesquelles ces ecrits representent un morceau d\'ectasy
schedule
June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It just keeps getting better as you go along. Sorry if I don\'t post anything big, I usually don\'t get on till right after work, when I\'m dead tired. Something about that keeps the brain from functioning.
But, anyways. Loved the chapter. I\'m really begining to like Mackie, and I like that you have Dimitri a lot here. Where\'s Weasel? Is this before him?
But, anyways. Loved the chapter. I\'m really begining to like Mackie, and I like that you have Dimitri a lot here. Where\'s Weasel? Is this before him?
schedule
June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want to see Mackie go after Fredo! lol \'Course, I also want to see Mackie go after a few other\'s, and see Angelo go after him. But, that\'s all relative. I wait patiently for you to decide to post another chapter. Meanwhile, my mind deteriorates as I wait.
No, I\'m not normally that dramatic...
No, I\'m not normally that dramatic...
schedule
June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, so sweet.... Poor Mackie (just that name I love it, makes me think of one of my favourite piece of oper, from Kurt
Weil and Brecht, but once again, totally irrelevant to my comments here...), I can see him going against Freddy (eventually) but can we find a way to accomodate Morgan and Brody (pretty please with some truffles on top...) Although I\'m not sure if he will fare better under Angelo\'s guidance... I can see Mackie being played as a puppet between the two of them.. It\'s just maddening because there are so many ways this story can turn out... Blood family, kin family, chosen family, he can just be split so much... And betray/be betrayed by either side... This feud will certainly be full of surprise (and did I mention lust, love, blood, hate, twisted, mind-fucking, mind-blowing) so please, give us more :-)
Et la conteuse repose sa plume tachee de sang d\'ou coulent des perles d\'eternite
Weil and Brecht, but once again, totally irrelevant to my comments here...), I can see him going against Freddy (eventually) but can we find a way to accomodate Morgan and Brody (pretty please with some truffles on top...) Although I\'m not sure if he will fare better under Angelo\'s guidance... I can see Mackie being played as a puppet between the two of them.. It\'s just maddening because there are so many ways this story can turn out... Blood family, kin family, chosen family, he can just be split so much... And betray/be betrayed by either side... This feud will certainly be full of surprise (and did I mention lust, love, blood, hate, twisted, mind-fucking, mind-blowing) so please, give us more :-)
Et la conteuse repose sa plume tachee de sang d\'ou coulent des perles d\'eternite
schedule
June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I should compose a mantra just for you: thank you, thank you, thank you !!! I meant to review earlier but RL got in the way and you already updated so more food for thoughts (and dreams). The premices are definitely interesting for this new installment in the Nocturne-verse: new characters (likeable, droolable or hateable for now which as usual is sure to change throughout the course of the story. One thing though, I\'d just love to see Freddy getting knocked down a few notches by a girl later on, given his views on body-for-fucking-and-breeding only (again, with the reservation that one can never know where you\'re going to take the mind behavior of your characters) Or alternatively, I\'m sure his meeting with Angelo would be something not to be missed (at least as envisionned in my somewhat-sometimes twisted mind...). Anyway, please forgive me for my disgressions (bad day, frustrated me and what better way to express it than to take it out on who better-a character-yeah well...), where was I... Ah yes, new facts/situations/inklings/clues as to the general world in which the BW universe is situated: psychic powers much more developed and diverse, yet Omega distinction seems more to me a delusion of Freddy, definitely interested in how they, if and when this is going to fit with our old (and much beloved) Nocturne characters. So basically, to summarize, you\'re once again going to torture us readers by making us avidly/agonizingly waiting for the next part... Please send my regards to the muse and let her know that bribes are serously considered to keep the story flowing :-)
Et au fil de la ritournelle eternelle, la melodie reprend ses ailes...
Et au fil de la ritournelle eternelle, la melodie reprend ses ailes...