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June 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please write more stories with Ms. Lace..............
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November 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please write more of this story!
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November 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update this! It's been forever and I just found and read this for the first time! Please have Ms. Lace get raped by dogs/hogs/snakes/horses, etc.
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be one of the worst stories I've ever read on this site. And trust me I like the freaky shit I've written some of it myself, but damn what the hell is this. There's NO logic in this story it's obviously written as a jerk off story likely for the author who's typing one handed. For someone who claims to respect woman, you're logic sure is backwards. I'd see you more as the wife beating type. Not to mention your absolute ignorance of the female body.
Dude if you're going to write a story about graphic sex and humiliation of this women you so respect, meet a REAL woman first and poke down there with a flashlight and map. I've never seen such a lack of imagination dragging this story into the most generic of levels. Oh wow she's a slave forced the pleasure people, hmm never heard that one before, oh she was impregnated....BORING. I don't know where this was supposed to go but it failed miserably.
Try to put some actual thought into your hypocritical stories. Seriously do you just hate women, or do you have thoughts of shoving your swollen penis down the throat of every women you respectfully meet at porn conventions. Well it's a shame I can't get back the half hour of my life this garbage stole from me, but I at least thought I'd leave a review on....this. Eh, and to think I thought I wouldn't find a story WORSE than the one I read yesterday. Come to think of it that one was by you too...so much for giving someone the benefit of the doubt.
Dude if you're going to write a story about graphic sex and humiliation of this women you so respect, meet a REAL woman first and poke down there with a flashlight and map. I've never seen such a lack of imagination dragging this story into the most generic of levels. Oh wow she's a slave forced the pleasure people, hmm never heard that one before, oh she was impregnated....BORING. I don't know where this was supposed to go but it failed miserably.
Try to put some actual thought into your hypocritical stories. Seriously do you just hate women, or do you have thoughts of shoving your swollen penis down the throat of every women you respectfully meet at porn conventions. Well it's a shame I can't get back the half hour of my life this garbage stole from me, but I at least thought I'd leave a review on....this. Eh, and to think I thought I wouldn't find a story WORSE than the one I read yesterday. Come to think of it that one was by you too...so much for giving someone the benefit of the doubt.
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
she was barely breathing last time, i would have thought as time goes on things get worse. i hope the next chapter is more harsh but less gross. don't get me wrong though, i like your work and eagerly await the next chapter.
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you have an odd mind..
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy this story but at the end will she excape?
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't say I'm too into the whole 'senior citizens having sex' thing, it's more disgusting than it is hot, but I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I'm drawn to this story for some reason, it's perversely entertaining!
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is just some severly f$#@ed up shit.......make some more :)
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU\'VE GOT TO CONTINUE!!! pwease?