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uhh, odd. i wanna see more of it though...........

Goodness me... Eh, where to begin.... Well, the whole fact of the matter is that there a chick getting screwed. By a dog. In present tense. Yeah, the whole present tense thing disturbed me. Oh, God... I\'m going to go curl up in a dark corner now.

dude that was wicked sick!. i mean who would even imagine something like that, totaly wicked man completly kick A**. any chance of a continuation of this story?

I cannot belive I accually like that....But I did. Please write more, I want to know what happend with Gord.

This is very good. Nicely done, maybe you should make another chapter.

I love this! SOOOOOOOOOOOOO can not wait for the next update! please keep writting! ^^

Loved your story! Can\'t wait for the sequal ^___^

The basic premise of the story is very good, but there are a few suggestions that I would like to make. First, your sentences tend to be really short and choppy. It sounds as if you are a bit uncomfortable writing something for the public eye. Try combining sentences here and there to make it flow better. Also, I noticed you used word several words repeatedly, such as \"maw,\" and I think it might be more interesting for reader and writer alike if you found some more descriptive words. Overall however, this is pretty good. You have a definite eye for plot, and I\'d like to see you write more.

really good! please continue.

I like it . Very good. Plz make ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!