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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad story, but the wierd and changing verb tenses make it difficult to read. Stick with one tense, and drop all the 'would's.
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Please make more chapters soon.
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fingers are burried...and i'm soaked. That was hot. ^_^
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continueeee. :D I\'m loving it.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eh, it was good. Sounds like you have a problem with tenses though. Don\'t switch between future/past makes it really hard to follow. Otherwise, nice job ;D
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! please update soon! I love this soooo much.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH!! Must.....have......more.....!!! When\'s the next update?????
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! great story! awesome descriptions! only minor gramatical errors, but overall very comprehendable! please continue!
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting I loved it ya must update please e-mail me when you update
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even to be writting about beastiality means you are a sicko. Freak.