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for Late Night Shopping

by Phorcys

person xDigitalBlasphemYx
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved this, your style of writing reminds me of one my fave authors
person L.C. Drusilla
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read this a while ago, when AFF was still going strong before its move and I just found it again tonight. I don't know if you have my original review or not but I thought it'd be nice to tell you how creative I found this story. Usually all vampire stories are so dramatic and action packed that when you find one that's rather normal it's sweet and endearing. I can say with satisfaction that I thoroughly enjoyed Late Night Shipping.
person aquamum
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like this first chapter - your story has the potential to turn into something.
I hope you have an idea where it is you want to go.....
I am looking forward to chapter 2....
person Maniacal-Intellectual
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright, wtf is this shit? Seriously...June 6th of 2005? And there's NOTHING NEW ON HERE. Oh sorry a changed word or a comma some where...you're a lame person who just needs to be at the top of everyone's list hmm? what's that? You want attention? Go home and cry to mama baby girl, cause you ain't getting shit from me. I'd probably be more...laid back about this but damn wench, learn how to climb the ladder like EVERYONE else here. Write another chapter...post it up. We all get writers block and stop to focus, but you just stopped and want EVERYONE here to look at your non existing story. A word of advice, Go away think up some truly authentic mind boggling ideas and plaster it into your story. But who am I to say anything, I'm just a writer and a reader too over the age of 30, I mean what could I possibly know right?

PS: I'm just complaining about this story here.
person sam
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey!! i like your story alot. please update it??? becuase the only reason i read yours was becuase it had good reviews. and i normally dont go to read stories that have less than five chapters. i wait until they get more till i read it. but i really like yours^^ i cannot wait for you to update^^

ja ne!!! *** samchan***
person ennariam2010
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
beautiful...nicley done...uhhhh...could you keep going...please...
enna
person Estellio
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice concept, I\'d like to see where this goes.
person Neth
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, you know, be inspired and stuff. Cause it just doesn\'t seem finished... and I liked it.
Ok, so me liking it is the only reason I want you to keep going... but I am super awesome and you should do like I say.
person r
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sends inspiration*
sorry but its all that i have
i like it
and all the good guys really ARE either married, gay or dead