AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for My Tarnished Angel

by ash1980

schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I WILL GIVE IT A TRY.
person midnighteyes
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Real good start.. Already have me hooked. Can't wait for more...
person Rydavim
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The plot line is fairly well developed and it's a really creative idea. You're a very talented writer - have you ever thought of getting an editor? There are a couple sentences and a few typos that could be fixed to improve "My Tarnished Angel" even more, and make it easier to read. Nice job - keep it up!
person SODA
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was cute!!
person Shadows_Corpse
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww! How dare a man capture and beat such a beatiful creature! The best creature with wings!
person Faith
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its really good. I really like it