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person Child of the Darkened Moon
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I even need to tell you how disturbing that was. And I'm amazed I even bothered reading the entire thing. But now I don't think I'm going to eat for another couple of hours. Still... it was a pretty good idea for a story... I think.
person Fallen
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Very descriptive story. *spoiler* Too bad Tarn was alive all the way up to digestion. I was hoping that he would die or pass out way before then.*end spoiler* Oh well, just goes to show that not all sexy nagas are good nagas.
person blisblop
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Umm,really disgusting and I own a snake.My fault, you gave plenty of warning.I guess this means you wrote this well if disgust is what you wanted,um I am not into rape between strangers that is painful so that did nothing for me.I kinda HATE pain.But you squicked me good so good writing for that.UUhhh...yeah.The guy passively watching himself be mutilated reminds me of a beheading I saw on the net.They where given a drug to slow down bleeding and I guess that passified them,paralised them more likely.Fucking disgusting,I felt horrible when I found out it was for real(American military during the war).To this day I am squicked.
person Yamima
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was weird, well written though